History— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构不完整。建议注意时态和冠词的使用，避免拼写错误，并使句子更流畅自然。

예시: Yes, I started learning both national and international history in primary school, and I still learn about history through the Internet nowadays.

제안: 回答中时态不一致，表达不够连贯，且用词不够准确。建议统一时态，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I learn history mainly through school lessons. Besides that, I often borrow history books or encyclopedias that contain many historical stories.

제안: 回答内容不够具体，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确表达观点，使用具体例子或原因，并注意语法和句子完整性。

예시: Learning history helps us understand our origins and future direction. It also teaches us valuable lessons about human nature and society.

제안: 回答较为完整，但用词稍显简单，且部分表达不够地道。建议使用更丰富的词汇和更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I believe learning history is important because it helps us avoid misunderstandings and make wiser decisions by learning from past events.

× Yes, we Start learning national and international history, begin at the primary school and for now we still learn some history from Internet.

✓ Yes, we start learning national and international history, beginning at primary school, and for now we still learn some history from the Internet.

句子中动词时态应为一般现在时，且动词形式应小写。'Start'应为'start'，'begin'应改为现在分词'beginning'以连接句子。'Internet'前应加定冠词'the'。

× I learned history from the school lessons.

✓ I learn history from the school lessons.

问题中时态应与提问时态一致，考官问的是一般情况，学生应使用一般现在时。'learned'应改为'learn'。

× Apart from that we still can borrow some books about history or encyclopedia which include a large amount of history story.

✓ Apart from that, we can still borrow some books about history or encyclopedias which include a large amount of historical stories.

'still can'的顺序应为'can still'。'encyclopedia'应为复数形式'encyclopedias'，'history story'应为复数'historical stories'。

× Learning history can help us to know where we are from and where we are going to do.

✓ Learning history can help us know where we are from and where we are going.

'help'后面接动词时不需要' to '。'going to do'不合适，应该直接用'going'表示去向。

× It's a good way for us to get the philosophy from what we are really being and.

✓ It's a good way for us to get the philosophy of what we really are.

'get the philosophy from what we are really being and'结构不正确，'being and'无意义，应改为'philosophy of what we really are'。

× Yes, I think learning history is important because it's an efficient way for us to avoid the misunderstanding and make wiser decisions through the lessons from the past events.

✓ Yes, I think learning history is important because it's an efficient way for us to avoid misunderstandings and make wiser decisions through lessons from past events.

'the misunderstanding'应为复数形式'misunderstandings'，'the lessons'和'the past events'中的定冠词可省略以表达泛指。