Stories— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you love stories in your childhood?
수험생
Acquired love stories when I was a child. When I was a child, my mother always told me about fairy tale and I always admit about some character in this fairy tales and now I have an image.
시험관
Do you prefer listening to stories or reading them?
수험생
I prefer listening to stories rather than reading them because when my mother used to tell me very careful, it created a special bonding camp between us. I really enjoyed those moments after they made us feel closer and more connected.
시험관
Did you ever write a story when you were a child?
수험생
When I was a child, I write so many stories because at that time I listened to so many funny tales and I want to write some stories and I wish I can make it popular.
시험관
What kind of stories do you like?
수험생
I like novel, sometimes I read it in my social media app and I feel it make me unquestioned after a hard working time. Besides, novel is so romantic and it's make my life more colorful and inactive.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you love stories in your childhood?
점수: 50.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Yes, I loved stories when I was a child. My mother often told me fairy tales, and I was fascinated by the characters. These stories helped me imagine different worlds and sparked my creativity.
Do you prefer listening to stories or reading them?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Hãy chú ý sử dụng thì đúng, từ vựng phù hợp và câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Thêm từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
예시: I prefer listening to stories rather than reading them because my mother used to tell them carefully. This created a special bond between us, and I really enjoyed those moments as they made us feel closer and more connected.
Did you ever write a story when you were a child?
점수: 55.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi về thì và cấu trúc câu. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ và chia câu rõ ràng hơn. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: When I was a child, I wrote many stories because I listened to a lot of funny tales. I wanted to write my own stories and hoped they would become popular.
What kind of stories do you like?
점수: 45.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng danh từ số nhiều khi nói về thể loại truyện, dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu văn rõ ràng. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể và từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
예시: I like novels, and sometimes I read them on social media apps. They help me relax after a hard day at work. Besides, novels are often romantic and make my life more colorful and interesting.
문법
× Acquired love stories when I was a child.
✓ I acquired a love for stories when I was a child.
The original sentence lacks a subject and is incomplete. Adding 'I' as the subject and clarifying the object 'a love for stories' makes the sentence complete and grammatically correct.
× my mother always told me about fairy tale
✓ my mother always told me about fairy tales
'Fairy tale' is a countable noun and should be pluralized to 'fairy tales' when referring to stories in general. Also, the definite article 'the' is not needed here.
× I always admit about some character in this fairy tales and now I have an image.
✓ I always admired some characters in these fairy tales and now I have an image.
The verb 'admit' is incorrect here; 'admired' fits the context. 'Some character' should be plural 'some characters' to match 'fairy tales'. Also, 'this' should be 'these' to agree with plural 'fairy tales'.
× when my mother used to tell me very careful
✓ when my mother used to tell me very carefully
The adverb 'carefully' should be used instead of the adjective 'careful' to modify the verb 'tell'.
× it created a special bonding camp between us.
✓ it created a special bonding camp between us.
The phrase 'bonding camp' is unusual and unclear in this context. It would be better to say 'it created a special bond between us.' However, since the instruction is to only correct grammar mistakes from the list, this is noted but not corrected.
× When I was a child, I write so many stories because at that time I listened to so many funny tales and I want to write some stories and I wish I can make it popular.
✓ When I was a child, I wrote so many stories because at that time I listened to so many funny tales and I wanted to write some stories and I wished I could make them popular.
The verbs 'write', 'want', and 'wish' should be in the past tense 'wrote', 'wanted', and 'wished' to match the past time frame. Also, 'can' should be changed to 'could' for past ability. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to 'stories' (plural).
× I like novel, sometimes I read it in my social media app and I feel it make me unquestioned after a hard working time.
✓ I like novels, sometimes I read them in my social media app and I feel they make me relaxed after a hard working time.
'Novel' should be plural 'novels' to indicate general preference. Pronouns 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'novels'. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' or 'make' depending on the subject; here 'they make' is correct. The word 'unquestioned' is incorrect in this context; 'relaxed' or 'untroubled' would be appropriate, but since it's not in the grammar problem list, it is noted but not corrected.
× Besides, novel is so romantic and it's make my life more colorful and inactive.
✓ Besides, novels are so romantic and they make my life more colorful and active.
'Novel' should be plural 'novels' to match the context. 'It's' (it is) should be 'they' to agree with plural 'novels'. The verb 'make' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'they'. The word 'inactive' is likely a misuse; 'active' fits better, but this is not a grammar problem from the list.
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