Stories— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول تبقى إجابتك أوضح ومنظمة أكتر. استخدم جمل قصيرة وواضحة، وركز على نقطة واحدة في كل مرة. مثلاً، ابدأ بجملة رئيسية عن حبك للقصص، وبعدين اشرح ليه بتحبها، واذكر مثال واحد واضح زي كتاب ناروتو. كمان حاول تستخدم كلمات مناسبة وسليمة نحويًا.

예시: Yes, I loved stories in my childhood because they helped me gain confidence. For example, I enjoyed reading the Naruto book, which taught me a lot and inspired me to learn seven languages.

제안: ركز على ترتيب أفكارك واستخدم روابط بين الجمل عشان تكون إجابتك مترابطة وواضحة. حاول تتجنب الأخطاء النحوية والكلمات الغير مناسبة. مثلاً، ابدأ بجملة واضحة عن تفضيلك للقراءة، ثم اشرح السبب مع ذكر تفاصيل محددة.

예시: I prefer reading stories because they are entertaining and educational. For instance, reading many stories motivated me to learn seven different languages, which improved my communication skills.

제안: حاول تبني إجابتك بشكل أفضل باستخدام جمل واضحة وصحيحة نحويًا. ابدأ بجملة رئيسية، ثم اشرح السبب بشكل مفصل مع أمثلة. استخدم كلمات مناسبة وسهلة الفهم.

예시: I tried to write stories when I was a child, but I found it difficult because it requires many skills. For example, I needed to read many books as a hobby to improve my writing.

제안: حاول توضح إجابتك بشكل أفضل وتستخدم جمل صحيحة نحويًا. ابدأ بجملة رئيسية عن نوع القصص التي تحبها، ثم اشرح السبب مع تفاصيل محددة. استخدم كلمات مناسبة وسهلة الفهم.

예시: I like religious stories because they make me feel peaceful and help me love God more.

× I love stories because it is making me a confidence person like a Naruto book that have a lot of information that helped me to learn languages seven language I learned and it make me.

✓ I love stories because they make me a confident person, like a Naruto book that has a lot of information that helped me learn seven languages.

The phrase 'it is making me' is incorrect because 'make' is a stative verb here and should be in simple present tense. Also, 'confidence person' should be 'confident person' (adjective form). 'Naruto book that have' should be 'Naruto book that has' to agree with singular subject. 'Helped me to learn languages seven language I learned and it make me' is unclear and ungrammatical; corrected to 'helped me learn seven languages.'

× I really prefer reading books that because can be entertainment.

✓ I really prefer reading books because they can be entertaining.

The phrase 'that because' is incorrect; 'because' alone is sufficient to introduce the reason. Also, 'can be entertainment' should be 'can be entertaining' to use the correct adjective form.

× Me also taught me a lot of new work thanks to these stories.

✓ They also taught me a lot of new words thanks to these stories.

The pronoun 'Me' is incorrect as the subject; it should be 'They' referring to the stories. Also, 'new work' should be 'new words' to make sense.

× Like a lot of stories, I was motivated to learn 7 different languages which improved me to communication skills.

✓ Like many stories, I was motivated to learn 7 different languages which improved my communication skills.

'Improved me to communication skills' is incorrect; it should be 'improved my communication skills' to show possession and correct object.

× I tried to write stories but I can't because this need a lot of skills like reading a lot lot of books to had as a hobby.

✓ I tried to write stories but I couldn't because it needs a lot of skills, like reading many books as a hobby.

'Can't' should be past tense 'couldn't' to match 'tried'. 'This need' should be 'it needs' for subject-verb agreement. 'Had as a hobby' is incorrect; 'as a hobby' suffices. 'A lot lot of books' should be 'many books'.

× I think religions are stories because it's make me feel peace and my make me love the God.

✓ I think religious stories make me feel peace and make me love God.

'Religions are stories' is incorrect; 'religious stories' is the correct phrase. 'It's make me' should be 'make me' to agree with plural subject. 'My make me love the God' is incorrect; corrected to 'make me love God' without article 'the'.