Stories— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

예시: Yes, I loved stories when I was a child. I often listened to my parents and grandparents telling me tales, which I found very enjoyable and exciting.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Choose one preference and explain it clearly with supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid vague phrases.

예시: I prefer reading stories because it allows me to imagine the scenes in my mind. However, sometimes I listen to stories from my grandparents at night when I am tired.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and explain your experience clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples.

예시: Yes, I often wrote stories when I was a child. I was inspired by historical TV series I watched, and I tried to create my own stories based on them.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar errors. Clearly state your favourite type of stories and explain why you like them using specific reasons and linking words.

예시: I like many types of stories, but I especially enjoy suspenseful mystery stories because I like the excitement of finding out what happens next.

× Yes, he goes.

✓ Yes, I do.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to themselves. The correct pronoun is 'I'. Also, 'goes' is not appropriate in this context; the correct response to 'Do you love stories?' is 'Yes, I do.'

× I love those stories when I was child, right?

✓ I loved those stories when I was a child, right?

The noun 'child' requires an article 'a' before it. Also, since the time is in the past ('when I was a child'), the verb should be in the past tense 'loved'.

× I think so every they're listening this story to our parents and others.

✓ I think everyone listened to these stories from our parents and others.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Every they're listening this story' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'everyone listened to these stories' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× So I'm very enjoying the story when I was trying to follow my jam.

✓ So I really enjoyed the stories when I was trying to follow my jam.

The phrase 'I'm very enjoying' is incorrect; 'enjoy' is not used in the continuous form here. Also, 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match context. The verb tense is adjusted to past tense 'enjoyed' to match 'when I was'. The phrase 'my jam' is unclear but left as is.

× Yeah, both are good for Maine listing story.

✓ Yeah, both are good for me in listening to stories.

'Maine' is a misspelling of 'me'. Also, 'listing story' should be 'listening to stories' for correct meaning and grammar.

× Is it a good in the night and I can when I was tired.

✓ It is good at night when I am tired.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× I am listening to story for my grandparents.

✓ I listen to stories from my grandparents.

'Listening to story for my grandparents' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'listen to stories from my grandparents' to indicate the source of stories.

× Yes, I often write a story when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I often wrote stories when I was a child.

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'wrote'. Also, 'a story' should be plural 'stories' to match 'often'.

× I am a. Watching it on TV, app is older.

✓ I used to watch it on TV; the app is older.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction assumes intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I like historical serial so then I will write some stories.

✓ I like historical series, so then I would write some stories.

'Serial' should be 'series' for the correct noun. Also, 'will' is changed to 'would' to match past context.

× So I was in inspiration from there.

✓ So I was inspired by them.

The phrase 'I was in inspiration from there' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I was inspired by them'.

× So sometimes I get empathize. Standing in some stories.

✓ So sometimes I empathize with characters in some stories.

'Get empathize' is incorrect; the verb is 'empathize'. Also, 'Standing in some stories' is unclear; corrected to 'with characters in some stories'.

× I like many types of stories, but I'm prepared to live with suspense stories because his best story is a find out what is coming is unnecessary.

✓ I like many types of stories, but I prefer suspense stories because the best part is finding out what is coming; it is exciting.

'I'm prepared to live with' is incorrect; 'I prefer' is appropriate. 'His best story' should be 'the best part'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× It is very suspenseful mystery story.

✓ It is a very suspenseful mystery story.

The article 'a' is missing before 'very suspenseful mystery story'.

× Uh. Is very.

✓ It is very good.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear; completed to a meaningful phrase.