Stories— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors that make it difficult to understand. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Use simple and correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I loved listening to stories during my childhood. My maternal grandparents often told me exciting and meaningful stories that taught me valuable lessons and skills.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your preference clearly with reasons, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: I usually prefer listening to stories rather than reading them because reading can sometimes be boring and uncomfortable. Also, long reading sessions can make me feel dizzy or tired.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and specific details about your experience writing stories, using correct grammar and linking words.

예시: Yes, when I was a child, my teachers gave me homework to write stories. I wrote different types of stories, and my favorite was "The Thirsty Crow," which taught the importance of hard work and success.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples of the types of stories you like, explaining why you enjoy them. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I like all kinds of stories because each type teaches different morals and knowledge. However, I especially enjoy adventurous stories because they are exciting and full of surprises.

× Yes, it during my childhood I like do very much to listen stories from my in grandparents are also my maternal grandparents are as they divert daughter different types of stories of which are very exciting and having wonderful and anger, which helps her to give me knowledge as well as their skills.

✓ Yes, during my childhood I liked to listen to stories from my grandparents, especially my maternal grandparents, as they told different types of stories which were very exciting and wonderful, which helped me gain knowledge as well as skills.

The original sentence has incorrect verb tense and structure. 'I like do very much to listen stories' is incorrect; it should be 'I liked to listen to stories' to match past tense and correct verb usage. Also, prepositions like 'to listen to stories' are necessary. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, it during my childhood I like do very much to listen stories from my in grandparents are also my maternal grandparents are as they divert daughter different types of stories of which are very exciting and having wonderful and anger, which helps her to give me knowledge as well as their skills.

✓ Yes, during my childhood I liked to listen to stories from my grandparents, especially my maternal grandparents, as they told different types of stories which were very exciting and wonderful, which helped me gain knowledge as well as skills.

The phrase 'listen stories from' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'listen to stories from'. Prepositions are important to convey the correct relationship between verbs and objects.

× Most usually I prefer stories by listening as in reading I get bored.

✓ Usually, I prefer listening to stories because I get bored when reading.

The phrase 'Most usually' is incorrect; 'Usually' suffices. Also, 'prefer stories by listening' should be 'prefer listening to stories'. The sentence was rephrased for natural and grammatically correct expression.

× Also it is not very uncomfort able.

✓ Also, it is not very comfortable.

The word 'uncomfort able' is a misspelling of 'uncomfortable'. However, the intended meaning seems to be 'comfortable', so it was corrected accordingly.

× And as the long reading go becomes the mind adult also or dizziness could be seen a while reading stories.

✓ Also, long reading sessions can cause dizziness or tiredness while reading stories.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It was restructured to convey the intended meaning clearly and correctly.

× When I was a child are my teachers are gaver gave me a home worker to write down our stories and I'm on the timer item different types of stories about the most favorite story was my thirsty crow which is more alone was to do hard work and again the success.

✓ When I was a child, my teachers gave me homework to write stories. I wrote different types of stories. My favorite story was 'The Thirsty Crow', which taught the value of hard work and success.

The original sentence has multiple tense errors and unclear phrases. 'are my teachers are gaver gave me a home worker' is incorrect; corrected to 'my teachers gave me homework'. The sentence was split and rephrased for clarity and correct past tense usage.

× My favorite story was my thirsty crow which is more alone was to do hard work and again the success.

✓ My favorite story was 'The Thirsty Crow', which is about a crow who works hard and achieves success.

The story title should be capitalized and enclosed in quotes. The phrase 'more alone was to do hard work and again the success' is unclear and was corrected to a proper description. Articles like 'the' are necessary before 'Thirsty Crow' as it is a specific story.

× Usually I like all kinds of stories as different types of story have different moral and knowledge so the most like the stories are adventurous and.

✓ Usually, I like all kinds of stories because different types of stories have different morals and knowledge. I especially like adventurous stories.

The sentence had tense and pluralization errors ('story' should be 'stories', 'moral' should be 'morals'). The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.