Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use a linking phrase to add a brief reason. Correct subject-verb agreement and choose more natural adjectives.

예시: Yes. My wife enjoys keeping green plants, so we have several at home. They make the room feel healthier and more lively, which I really appreciate.

제안: Give a complete, well-structured answer: state the plant clearly, add a specific detail about why or how you grew it, and finish the cultural remark. Avoid filler words and complete the sentence.

예시: I grew several plants as a child, but the one I remember most is the morning glory. In Japan, many elementary-school students plant morning glories as part of a school gardening project because they grow quickly and have bright flowers.

제안: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence about your knowledge, then provide one or two specific tips using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid pauses and redundant phrases.

예시: I don't have much experience, but I learned one important tip: don't overwater plants. For example, morning glories need moderate watering and plenty of sunlight, so I focused on giving them water only when the soil felt dry.

제안: Be cautious when stating cultural facts—give a clear opinion and, if unsure, say so briefly and offer a comparison. Use hedging language (e.g. 'I'm not sure') and provide a reason or example to support your statement.

예시: I'm not sure about Chinese customs, but in Japan people sometimes avoid giving certain plants as gifts because they can symbolize funerals or bad luck. For instance, potted plants are less common than flowers at celebratory events.

× Yes, my wife likes green plants so we have several plants at home.

✓ Yes, my wife likes green plants, so we have several plants at home.

Comma needed before 'so' joining two independent clauses; this is a sentence structure/ punctuation issue. Improve by placing a comma before coordinating conjunctions that link two independent clauses.

× Green plants makes the room look more healthy and lively, so I like it.

✓ Green plants make the room look healthier and livelier, so I like them.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun/ adjective form errors: 'Green plants' is plural so verb should be 'make' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1 and 27). 'More healthy' is non-idiomatic; use comparative adjective 'healthier'. 'Lively' comparative is 'livelier'. Also 'plants' plural needs pronoun 'them' not 'it'. Improve by matching plural subject with plural verb and pronoun and using correct comparative adjectives.

× What plant did you grow when you were young?

✓ What plants did you grow when you were young?

Singular/plural choice with past tense: if asking generally about types, plural 'plants' is more natural. The past tense 'did grow' is correct, but number should match expected variety. Use plural when multiple types are implied.

× I grew several types of plants, but uh, one that I remember is morning glory.

✓ I grew several types of plants, but one that I remember is the morning glory.

Article usage with a specific common noun: use definite article 'the' before 'morning glory' when referring to the specific plant remembered (Grammar Problem Type 17/22). Past tense is correct.

× In Japanese, a lot of elementary school students plant morning glory for their.

✓ In Japan, many elementary school students plant morning glories for their school projects.

Sentence structure and incomplete noun phrase: 'In Japanese' should be 'In Japan' when talking about the country. 'A lot of' is informal; 'many' is better. 'Morning glory' as a countable plant in plural 'morning glories'. The phrase 'for their' is incomplete — add 'school projects' to complete the idea (Grammar Problem Type 26).

× Well, besides a growing morning glory for the elementary school gardening project, uh.

✓ Well, besides growing morning glories for the elementary school gardening project, I don't have much experience.

Incorrect verb form and sentence fragment: remove the article 'a' before the gerund 'growing' and use plural 'morning glories' to match generality. Original is a sentence fragment; complete it by adding a main clause (Grammar Problem Types 8 and 23/26).

× Don't give much too much water to plants is the only tip I have right now in my pocket so I don't know much.

✓ 'Don't give too much water to plants' is the only tip I have right now, so I don't know much else.

Multiple errors: phrasing and word order—'Don't give much too much' is redundant and incorrect; correct phrase is 'Don't give too much water to plants'. The original lacked proper quotation or embedding; treat the advice as a clause and then state 'is the only tip I have'. Add comma before 'so'. Also add 'else' for clarity (Grammar Problem Types 26 and 20).

× I don't know about Chinese people's uh, gift giving habits, but in Japan I guess giving plants, uh, is sometimes considered not good.

✓ I don't know about Chinese people's gift-giving habits, but in Japan I guess giving plants is sometimes considered bad.

Hyphenate 'gift-giving' as a compound adjective. Remove filler 'uh' and comma after 'plants'. 'Not good' is colloquial; 'bad' or 'inappropriate' is clearer. Sentence structure improves by smoothing hesitations (Grammar Problem Type 26).