Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Apni uttor e kichu bhul shobdo babohar korechen, jemon 'plans' er bodole 'plants' hobe, 'flower floors' er bodole 'flower plants' hobe. Uttor ta aro spostho korte chesta korun ebong beshi proyojonio tattho den. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor shorashori dite ebong poroborti tattho diye bistarito kotha bolte linking words babohar korun.

예시: No, I don't keep plants at home, but my wife does. She has many types of plants, including flowering plants and medicinal herbs. Because of her care, our home looks lively and fresh.

제안: Apnar uttor e kichu obosshor ache, jemon 'I remembered on my childhood' er bodole 'When I was a child' bhalo hobe. Apni uttor ta aro spostho ebong sohoje bujhte paren emon bhabe bolte paren. Linking words babohar kore uttor ta aro bistarito korte paren.

예시: When I was a child, I planted mango trees in the yard of my native village. I enjoyed taking care of them and watching them grow over the years.

제안: Apnar uttor e kichu bhul ache, jemon 'nursing his plants' er bodole 'taking care of her plants' hobe. Apni uttor ta aro spostho korte paren ebong linking words babohar kore bistarito kotha bolte paren. Uttor ta aro natural ebong sohoje bujhte paren emon bhabe bolun.

예시: Yes, I have learned how to grow plants from my wife because she takes care of her plants every day. Therefore, I have gained some knowledge about watering and providing sunlight to them.

제안: Apnar uttor e kichu bhul shobdo ache, jemon 'plans' er bodole 'plants' hobe, 'connecting' er bodole 'connect' hobe. Apni proshner uttor shorashori dite paren ebong supporting details dite linking words babohar korun. Uttor ta aro spostho ebong proyojonio tattho diye bistarito korun.

예시: I don't have Chinese friends, so I am not sure about their customs. However, some of my Bangladeshi friends give me plants as gifts. I take good care of them by watering regularly and giving enough sunlight, which helps me relax and connect with nature.

× No actually I don't but my wife keeps lots of plans at our home.

✓ No actually I don't but my wife keeps lots of plants at our home.

The word 'plans' is incorrect here; the correct plural form is 'plants' when referring to living vegetation. 'Plans' refers to intentions or arrangements, not living things. So, use 'plants' to indicate multiple living plants.

× There are so many variety of plans like flower floors, medicine type.

✓ There are so many varieties of plants like flower plants, medicinal types.

'Variety' should be pluralized to 'varieties' when referring to multiple kinds. Also, 'plans' should be 'plants'. 'Flower floors' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'flower plants' is appropriate. 'Medicine type' should be 'medicinal types' to describe types of plants used for medicine.

× Oh yeah, as far as I remember, I remembered on my childhood I planted some trees like mango trees in our yard of our native village.

✓ Oh yeah, as far as I remember, in my childhood I planted some trees like mango trees in the yard of our native village.

The phrase 'I remembered on my childhood' is incorrect. 'Remembered' is past tense but redundant here; 'as far as I remember' already sets the context. Use 'in my childhood' instead of 'on my childhood'. Also, 'yard of our native village' is better as 'the yard of our native village' for clarity.

× Oh yeah, I learned growing a plant from my wife because she actually everyday nursing his plants.

✓ Oh yeah, I learned how to grow plants from my wife because she actually nurses her plants every day.

'Growing a plant' should be 'how to grow plants' for correct expression. 'She actually everyday nursing his plants' has multiple errors: 'nursing' should be 'nurses' (third person singular present tense), 'everyday' should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase), and 'his plants' should be 'her plants' to match the subject 'she'.

× So I learned from her it is.

✓ So I learned from her.

The phrase 'it is' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect. The sentence is complete and clear without it.

× No actually I don't have a Chinese friend but I have some Bangladeshi friend who gives me some plans as gift and I regularly water them and give them enough sunlight.

✓ No actually I don't have a Chinese friend but I have some Bangladeshi friends who give me some plants as gifts and I regularly water them and give them enough sunlight.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'some'. 'Gives' should be 'give' to agree with plural 'friends'. 'Plans' should be 'plants'. 'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match 'some'.

× I find it interesting because it helps me relax and connecting with nature.

✓ I find it interesting because it helps me relax and connect with nature.

After 'helps me', the verb should be in base form 'connect' not 'connecting'. Using 'and' connects two verbs in the same form: 'relax' and 'connect'.