Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用有较多错误，信息重复且不够具体。建议先用一句主题句直接回答（比如：I often visit video-sharing and social media sites），然后用一两句具体细节说明常看哪些内容并解释原因，注意时态和动词搭配（e.g. "watch music videos" 而不是 "watch a music movies"），避免不完整句子与多余短语。多使用连接词如 "and", "also", "for example" 来增强连贯性。

예시: I often visit video-sharing sites like Bilibili and social apps like WeChat. I usually watch music videos and short performances on Bilibili, because they are entertaining and easy to access. I also use WeChat to keep in touch with friends and share interesting clips.

제안: 总体表达较清晰，有主题句并提供了具体理由，但句子可以更自然、简洁并加入连接词以提升流畅性。建议把“for example”后的内容更具体（举一两个具体例子），并把“What's more”换为更正式的连接词如 "Besides" 或 "Also"。注意少用口语化的填充词如 "and so on"。

예시: My favourite website is Bilibili because I can learn a variety of skills there. For example, I follow channels that teach piano techniques and short dance tutorials. Besides, I often meet people with similar hobbies in the comments and live chats.

제안: 回答结构良好，有对比信息，但语言有语法小错误和表达不够地道。建议用更连贯的比较句型，如 "I used to... but now..."，并说明原因时给出具体原因（例如更多功能或更方便）。注意动词搭配："prefer using" 或 "prefer to use"。

예시: I used to use QQ a lot when I was in primary school, but now I mainly use WeChat. Many people prefer WeChat because it has more features like payment, group chats and moments, which makes communication more convenient.

제안: 回答含糊且有语法错误（例如不完整的从句“which can help me make new friends?”）。建议先概括几类受欢迎的网站（视频平台、社交媒体、新闻网站等），然后用一两个具体原因支持观点，避免问句形式的不确定表达。

예시: In my country, video-sharing platforms like Bilibili and social media apps such as WeChat are very popular. People use them to learn new skills, watch entertainment and connect with others, so these sites attract a large audience.

제안: 回答混乱且多处不通顺，原因不明确（“through time” 等短语不合适），信息零散。建议先直截了当地给出偏好，然后解释具体原因并举例场景（比如在地铁上用手机查资料），句子保持简洁且逻辑连贯。

예시: I prefer getting information from websites because they are quick and accessible on my phone. For example, when I travel to school by bus, I can read articles or watch tutorials online, which saves time compared with looking things up in books.

제안: 回答意图明确，但表达需更自然、具体。建议先给出直接肯定句，然后说明网站的用途和目标受众（例如分享钢琴教学视频、练习笔记），并解释预期成果。避免重复短语并注意动词形式（"share my piano performances"）。

예시: Yes, I would like to have my own website to share piano tutorials and practice videos. My goal would be to help beginners improve their skills by posting short lessons, sheet music and practice tips.

제안: 回答内容重复且不够聚焦（更多是在列兴趣）。应具体说明学到的技能或知识及其对生活/学习的实际帮助，例如学会一个菜谱或改进钢琴技巧，并用因果句型（"so"、"therefore"）说明结果。减少泛泛而谈的列表。

예시: I have learned practical skills from Bilibili that help my daily life, such as cooking simple meals and basic piano techniques. For instance, after following a few piano tutorials, I can play short pieces more smoothly, which reduces stress and improves my study routine.

× Music In my free time I often use bilibili and technos. I prefer watch a music movies. What's more, I also like WeChat. I prefer with my.

✓ Music. In my free time I often use Bilibili and Technos. I prefer watching music videos/movies. What's more, I also like WeChat. I prefer to use it with my friends.

句中原文“I prefer watch a music movies”动词prefer后需接动名词或不定式，且搭配要合理，且复数/单数错杂。应改为“prefer watching music videos/movies”或“prefer to watch music videos/movies”。另外最后一句“I prefer with my”结构不完整，推测意为“我更喜欢和朋友一起用（微信）”，应补全为“prefer to use it with my friends”。建议：学习动词后常见搭配（prefer + -ing 或 prefer + to + 动词），并注意句子完整性与名词单复数。

× My favorite website is Bilibili. I think it is very convenient because I can learn different things, for example, music, dancing, cooking and so on. What's more, I can make new friends.

✓ My favorite website is Bilibili. I think it is very convenient because I can learn different things, for example, music, dance, cooking and so on. What's more, I can make new friends.

原句中列举项使用了不一致的词类（dancing作为动名词而其他为名词），影响表达的自然度。虽然不是典型冠词错误，但属于词形式不当，按题单中最接近的类型归为“Article errors/词形一致”处理。建议将各项统一为名词形式（music, dance, cooking）。

× In my primary school I often use QQ with my friends. However, nowadays many people prefer use WeChat because I think it is popular in our country.

✓ In my primary school I often used QQ with my friends. However, nowadays many people prefer to use WeChat because I think it is popular in our country.

第一句描述过去的习惯，应使用过去时“used”。第二句中“prefer use”中间缺不定式标记，应为“prefer to use”。建议区分过去习惯与现在习惯的时态，并记住prefer后常接不定式或动名词结构。

× In my country, I think Bilibili is very popular because many people prefer usability to learn different things, for example, dancing, cooking and so on. What's more, which can help me make new friends?

✓ In my country, I think Bilibili is very popular because many people prefer using it to learn different things, for example, dance, cooking and so on. What's more, it can help me make new friends.

原句“prefer usability to learn”中“usability”用法不当，应为“using it”或“it’s useful”来表达“人们喜欢用它来学习”。另外“which can help me make new friends?”使用了不正确的代词和疑问句语气，应改为陈述句“it can help me make new friends”。建议练习常见动词搭配（prefer + using sth / prefer to do sth）并注意代词指代和句子类型（陈述句/疑问句）。

× I prefer getting information from website because I think it is very convenient and through time, especially when I go to school by public transport. What's more, I think a youth website is easy. Share my good idea.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites because I think it is very convenient and saves time, especially when I go to school by public transport. What's more, I think a youth website is easy to use for sharing my good ideas.

原句“from website”应为复数或加冠词“from websites”或“from a website”。“through time”用法不当，应为“saves time”。“I think a youth website is easy. Share my good idea.”句子碎片未连接，需合并为“easy to use for sharing my good ideas”。建议注意名词可数性、固定短语（save time）及避免句子碎片，确保句子完整流畅。

× Yes, of course, I really want to build my own website because I really share my good idea online. What's more, I like playing the piano, so I want to share my play the piano online, which can help other people.

✓ Yes, of course. I really want to build my own website because I want to share my good ideas online. What's more, I like playing the piano, so I want to share my piano playing online, which can help other people.

原句中“because I really share”时态和语态不当，应使用意愿表达“want to share”。“share my play the piano online”结构错误，应改为“share my piano playing online”。建议使用情态/意愿动词（want to）表达目的，并用正确的名词短语（piano playing）。

× In my free time I often use bilibili to different things. For example, I like the dancing, cooking, play the piano and so on. So I think it is very convenient for me and it can help me relax.

✓ In my free time I often use Bilibili for different things. For example, I like dancing, cooking, playing the piano and so on. So I think it is very convenient for me and it can help me relax.

第一句中动词短语常用介词“for”表示用途；第二句中列举活动时应使用动名词形式保持一致：dancing, cooking, playing the piano。原句“play the piano”需改为动名词“playing the piano”。建议注意介词搭配和并列元素形式一致（parallel structure）。