Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, pronounce words clearly, and give one or two specific examples with brief reasons. Use a linking phrase when adding details.

예시: I often visit social media and AI websites. For example, I use Facebook and Instagram to keep in touch with friends and share photos, and I use Gemini to ask questions and get quick answers when I’m stuck.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence naming the site, avoid filler words, and add one or two specific examples of how you use it. Use linking words (for example, because) to explain why it’s your favourite.

예시: My favourite website is Clock, an AI assistant, because it helps me with daily tasks. For example, I ask it to draft emails and brainstorm ideas, which saves me time and improves my work.

제안: Answer directly and use past vs present contrast clearly. Reduce hesitations and complete your final thought. Give one specific past example and one present example with a linking phrase such as “but now” or “these days.”

예시: Yes. In the past I mainly visited entertainment sites, such as video game forums and football news. But these days I mostly browse professional sites about AI and technology to learn new skills.

제안: Start with a concise topic sentence, use plural/singular agreement, and provide one or two representative examples with brief reasons. Avoid filler phrases like “like I want to mention.”

예시: Social networks such as Facebook, Instagram and Zalo are very popular in Vietnam because people use them to chat and share news. Also, Vietnam Express is one of the largest online newspapers and many people read it for current affairs.

제안: Make a clear comparative statement and give two concise reasons with linking words (for example, because / while). Avoid repetition and hesitations.

예시: I prefer websites because they allow quick searches and up-to-date information. While books are useful for deep study, websites let me access many resources and the latest news fast.

제안: Respond directly, avoid repetition, and give specific details about the website’s purpose and content. Use linking words such as “for example” to make it coherent.

예시: Yes. I already have a portfolio website where I share my blog and showcase software projects I’ve developed. For example, I post project descriptions, screenshots and links to demos.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence about the benefit, then give a specific example and explain what you learned. Avoid vague phrases and hesitations; use linking words like “for example” and “such as.”

예시: Websites have taught me new skills that help my studies and career. For example, I took several Coursera courses on programming and data analysis, which improved my coding skills and made my projects more professional.

× I often visit many kinds many kinds of website.

✓ I often visit many kinds of websites.

The noun 'website' should be plural after 'many kinds of'. Use 'websites' to match the plural quantifier. Suggestion: use 'many kinds of websites' or 'many different websites'.

× I usually visit Facebook or Instagram to commu communicate and share stuff with my friends.

✓ I usually visit Facebook or Instagram to communicate and share stuff with my friends.

The verb 'communicate' was split and misspelled. Use the base form 'communicate' after 'to'. Ensure infinitive 'to communicate' is complete.

× And I often go to like Cloth or Gemini to ask AI questions.

✓ And I often go to sites like Cloth or Gemini to ask AI questions.

The phrase 'go to Cloth' is unclear; websites should be referred to as 'sites' or 'websites'. Also 'Cloth' likely a site name; use 'sites like Cloth or Gemini'. Ensure noun plurality and clarity.

× My favorite website now is, uh, clock.

✓ My favorite website now is Clock.

Proper names of websites should be capitalized and do not need an article. If 'Clock' is the site name, write it with initial capital and no 'the'.

× It's, it's an AI agent that can help me to do many things.

✓ It's an AI agent that can help me do many things.

After 'help' use the bare infinitive 'do' rather than 'to do'. Remove the extra 'to'. Also avoid repeated fillers 'it's, it's'.

× I can ask, uh, it uh, many question, many questions in my life and also ask, ask it to make some useful stuff for me.

✓ I can ask it many questions in my life and also ask it to make useful things for me.

Use plural 'questions' after 'many'. Reduce repetitions and replace informal 'stuff' with 'things'. Use 'ask it' without extra fillers.

× Yes, when I was a child or when I was in university, I often visit, uh, entertainment website, for example, like video games website or uh, football news website.

✓ Yes, when I was a child or when I was at university, I often visited entertainment websites, for example video game websites or football news websites.

Narration about past time requires past tense 'visited' not 'visit'. Use plural 'websites' after 'entertainment'. Use 'at university' in British English and pluralize specific site types.

× But nowadays I just want to finish, uh, to, to visit uh, professional website like AI or.

✓ But nowadays I just want to visit professional websites about AI.

After 'want to' use the base verb 'visit' (not 'to visit' repeated). Use plural 'websites' and complete the phrase 'about AI'. Remove fillers and repetitions.

× Some websites that are very popular in my country is Facebook, Instagram, Zalo.

✓ Some websites that are very popular in my country are Facebook, Instagram and Zalo.

Subject 'Some websites' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. Ensure proper conjunction 'and' before the last item.

× Those are popular social network websites in Vietnam and also like I want to mention like Vietnam Express is the biggest online newspaper in Vietnam.

✓ Those are popular social networking websites in Vietnam. I also want to mention that Vietnam Express is one of the biggest online newspapers in Vietnam.

Avoid redundant 'like' and run-on sentence. 'Social networking websites' is a more natural phrase. Use 'one of the biggest' if not certain; include 'that' for clarity.

× I prefer getting information from websites because, uh, I can search many things on the, on the website, which I it's very hard to do it with a book and yeah, and can I can read many more stuff in the website.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites because I can search many things on a website, which is very hard to do with a book, and I can read many more things on websites.

Remove filler words and repetition. Use 'which is' instead of 'which I it's'. Use 'things' instead of 'stuff' and consistent plural 'websites' or 'a website'. Avoid redundant 'do it'.

× Yeah, I do like to have my own own website and actually I do have my own website.

✓ Yes, I would like to have my own website, and actually I do have my own website.

Replace colloquial 'yeah' with 'yes' for clarity and 'do like' with 'would like' when expressing desire; remove duplicated 'own'.

× It's My Portfolio website, uh, where I share uh, my blog or share new software product, uh, that I made.

✓ It's my portfolio website where I share my blog and new software products that I have made.

Use lowercase for 'my' unless it's a proper name. 'Portfolio website' does not require 'the'. Use plural 'products' and present perfect 'have made' to indicate completed actions relevant to present.

× Umm, there are many kinds of websites that taught me many different kind of lessons or experience.

✓ Umm, there are many kinds of websites that have taught me many different kinds of lessons and experiences.

Use present perfect 'have taught' for past actions with present relevance. Match plural forms: 'kinds' and 'kinds of lessons and experiences'.

× But I want to mention uh, Coursera which is it is a biggest online courses website in the world and I learned many courses on Coursera.

✓ But I want to mention Coursera, which is one of the biggest online course websites in the world, and I have taken many courses on Coursera.

Use 'one of the biggest' rather than 'the biggest' unless certain. Use 'online course website' or 'platform' and present perfect 'have taken' for learning experiences relevant now. Remove redundant 'it is'.