Cars— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally good but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and maintain consistent verb tenses. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' and 'which allowed me to'.

예시: Yes, I really enjoyed traveling by car when I was a kid because it allowed me to see beautiful scenery such as jungles, trees, seas, and mountains up close, which made the journey more relaxing compared to flying.

제안: Good content and structure, but avoid repeating words like 'exciting exciting'. Also, try to use linking words such as 'and' or 'moreover' to connect your ideas more naturally.

예시: I really like sports cars and hypercars because they are very fast and have exciting designs. Moreover, I enjoy driving manual transmission cars since they give me more control and make the driving experience more engaging.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. For example, 'my car have' should be 'my car has'. Also, the sentence 'so I can't control the car' contradicts your preference. Try to clarify your ideas and use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

예시: I prefer to be the driver because my car has a manual transmission, which allows me to control the car by changing gears. This makes the driving experience more enjoyable, and I can also listen to music and enjoy the scenery like mountains and jungles.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many filler words like 'uh' and 'huh'. Also, avoid giving instructions in the second person; instead, talk about your own actions. Use linking words like 'firstly' and 'secondly' properly and improve grammar, for example, 'careful to the road' should be 'careful on the road'.

예시: When there is a traffic jam, I usually try to change to the second lane because it tends to move faster. Secondly, I avoid using my phone to stay focused on the road and reduce distractions.

× I really like a sports car and hyper cars because they are very fast and have an exciting exciting design.

✓ I really like sports cars and hyper cars because they are very fast and have an exciting design.

The phrase 'a sports car and hyper cars' mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. 'Sports cars' is plural, so the article 'a' should be removed to match the plural noun. Also, 'exciting' was repeated twice, so one should be removed for clarity.

× my car have a manual transmission, so I can't control the car, change the gears and listen to music and see the mountains and jungles.

✓ my car has a manual transmission, so I can control the car, change the gears, listen to music, and see the mountains and jungles.

The subject 'my car' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number. Also, the phrase 'I can't control the car' contradicts the intended meaning; it should be 'I can control the car' to express ability. Additionally, commas are added for clarity in the list.

× you need to be careful to the road and it's annoying so much.

✓ you need to be careful on the road and it's very annoying.

The correct preposition with 'careful' in this context is 'on' not 'to'. Also, 'so much' is awkward here; 'very' is a better adverb to modify 'annoying'.