Cars— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid repetition and improve sentence fluency. For example, instead of repeating 'I and also I', use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: No, I did not enjoy traveling by car as a child because sitting for hours made me feel bored and often carsick. Consequently, I frequently asked the driver to stop so I could get some fresh air, which made our trips longer than expected.

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated phrases such as 'I and I'. Also, pay attention to grammar, for example, say 'these types of cars reduce' instead of 'this type of cars are reduce'. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: I prefer environmentally friendly cars because they help reduce air pollution and also save money on fuel costs.

제안: Good structure with clear contrast using 'however'. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I prefer I prefer'. Also, correct minor grammar errors such as 'driver license' should be 'a driver's license' and 'a long car rides' should be 'long car rides'.

예시: I prefer to be a passenger because I don't have a driver's license and cannot drive. However, if I had one, I would enjoy being the driver since it allows me to hang out with friends, listen to music, and explore new places.

제안: Your answer is relevant and detailed, but try to complete your sentences fully and avoid small grammar mistakes like 'have book' should be 'have a book'. Also, use linking words like 'or' and 'if' effectively to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Usually, when there is a traffic jam, I like to listen to music or watch my favorite movies to pass the time. If I have a book with me, I try to read and learn something new so that I don't waste time while stuck in traffic.

× No, I did not enjoy traveling by car when I was kid because I found sitting for hours very boring and I and also I always felt carsick because of that.

✓ No, I did not enjoy traveling by car when I was a kid because I found sitting for hours very boring and I also always felt carsick because of that.

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article ('a' or 'the'). The correct phrase is 'when I was a kid'. Also, the sentence has a repeated 'I and' which should be corrected to 'I also'.

× Uh, I prefer environmentally friendly cars because, uh, this type of cars are reduce air pollution and I and I also can, uh, save some money on the fuel.

✓ Uh, I prefer environmentally friendly cars because, uh, this type of car reduces air pollution and I also can, uh, save some money on fuel.

The phrase 'this type of cars' is incorrect because 'type' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun: 'car'. Also, 'are reduce' is incorrect; it should be 'reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'this type of car'. The article 'the' before 'fuel' is unnecessary here and should be omitted.

× I prefer I prefer to be a passenger because I don't have driver license and I don't know how to drive.

✓ I prefer to be a passenger because I don't have a driver's license and I don't know how to drive.

The phrase 'driver license' is incorrect; the correct term is 'driver's license' with a possessive form. Also, the repetition 'I prefer I prefer' should be corrected to a single 'I prefer'.

× However, if I had a license, I would prefer to be a driver because I enjoy a long car rides and driving would allow me to hang out with my friends while listening to music and exploring new things.

✓ However, if I had a license, I would prefer to be a driver because I enjoy long car rides and driving would allow me to hang out with my friends while listening to music and exploring new things.

The phrase 'a long car rides' is incorrect because 'rides' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. It should be 'long car rides' without the article 'a'.

× Usually when there is a traffic jam I like to listen to music or watch my favorite movies to pass the time, but if I happen to have book with me, I try to read and learn something new so that I don't waste the time stuck in the.

✓ Usually when there is a traffic jam I like to listen to music or watch my favorite movies to pass the time, but if I happen to have a book with me, I try to read and learn something new so that I don't waste time stuck in it.

The phrase 'have book with me' is missing the article 'a' before 'book'. Also, 'waste the time stuck in the' is incomplete and awkward; it should be 'waste time stuck in it' to correctly refer to being stuck in the traffic jam. The definite article 'the' before 'time' is unnecessary here.