Cars— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cavabınızda zaman uyumuna diqqət yetirin və cümlələri daha təbii və aydın qurun. Məsələn, keçmişdəki təcrübənizdən danışarkən, 'I enjoyed traveling by car when I was a kid' kimi ifadələr istifadə edin. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha səlis və məntiqli şəkildə ifadə etmək üçün əlavə dəstək verin.

예시: Yes, I really enjoyed traveling by car when I was a kid because it was very convenient for my family. Also, I liked that we could stop anywhere we wanted and enjoy the scenery along the way.

제안: Cavabınızda mövzuya uyğun və məntiqli ifadələrdən istifadə edin. 'OLX cars' ifadəsi aydın deyil və mövzu ilə əlaqəsiz görünür. Rənglərdən danışarkən, daha təbii ifadələr seçin və fikirlərinizi əlaqələndirin.

예시: I like cars that are comfortable and fast. My favorite colors for cars are white and orange because they look bright and attractive.

제안: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün qurun. Mövzunu dəstəkləyən səbəbləri daha səlis ifadə edin və lazımsız ifadələrdən çəkinin.

예시: I prefer being a passenger because when I travel long distances, I can relax and enjoy snacks without worrying about driving.

제안: Cümlələrinizi daha təbii və axıcı edin. Mövzunu dəstəkləyən səbəbləri daha aydın və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün ifadə edin.

예시: When there is a traffic jam, especially during peak hours in the city center, I usually prefer to take the metro because it is faster and more convenient than cars or taxis.

× I enjoy traveling by car when I was a kid because I think that traveling by car is more convenient and suitable for family, for people.

✓ I enjoyed traveling by car when I was a kid because I think that traveling by car is more convenient and suitable for families, for people.

The sentence mixes present tense 'enjoy' with past time reference 'when I was a kid'. The verb should be in past tense 'enjoyed' to match the past time frame. Also, 'family' should be plural 'families' to refer generally to people in families.

× Because yeah, you can write whatever you want if you need to keep.

✓ Because yeah, you can write whatever you want if you need to keep it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object 'it' after 'keep'. The preposition 'to' is unnecessary here; the verb 'keep' should be followed by the object.

× I like OLX cars, especially in white colors and orange colors because these are my favorite colors in the car.

✓ I like OLX cars, especially white and orange colors because these are my favorite car colors.

The phrase 'in white colors and orange colors' is awkward. It is better to say 'white and orange colors'. Also, 'my favorite colors in the car' is better expressed as 'my favorite car colors'.

× But I think that being comfortable and fast is necessary for cars and I like food.

✓ But I think that being comfortable and fast is necessary for cars, and I like that.

The phrase 'and I like food' is unrelated and seems out of context. It should be replaced with a pronoun referring back to the previous idea, such as 'I like that'.

× I'm not a driver, but I wanna be also a driver when I travel somewhere.

✓ I'm not a driver, but I also want to be a driver when I travel somewhere.

The informal contraction 'wanna' should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech. The word order 'be also a driver' is incorrect; it should be 'also want to be a driver'.

× But I prefer being a passenger than driver.

✓ But I prefer being a passenger to being a driver.

The correct preposition after 'prefer' when comparing two things is 'to', not 'than'. Also, parallel structure requires 'being a driver'.

× If you go for a long time, for a long way, yeah, whatever you want.

✓ If you travel for a long time or a long distance, you can relax and do whatever you want.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× You can relax and you can eat something easily. You.

✓ You can relax and eat something easily.

The last word 'You.' is unnecessary and incomplete. It should be removed for clarity.

× If I face this big hours, I usually prefer go by metro than cars or taxis.

✓ If I face these busy hours, I usually prefer to go by metro rather than by car or taxi.

The phrase 'this big hours' is incorrect; it should be 'these busy hours'. Also, 'prefer go' should be 'prefer to go'. The comparison should use 'rather than' and singular forms 'car' and 'taxi'.

× Yeah, because metro is faster and convenient in the traffic.

✓ Yeah, because the metro is faster and more convenient in traffic.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'metro'. Also, 'convenient' should be in comparative form 'more convenient' to match 'faster'. The phrase 'in the traffic' should be 'in traffic'.