Cars— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but lacks grammatical accuracy and clarity. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a clear topic sentence directly answering the question before adding details.

예시: I didn't enjoy traveling by car as a kid because we didn't own one. However, my father used to take us on long bike rides during weekends, which I enjoyed a lot.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and awkward phrasing. Use simpler and more natural expressions, and avoid repeating words. Also, explain why you prefer sedans with specific reasons.

예시: I like all types of cars, but I especially prefer sedans because we own one, and it is very comfortable for daily use.

제안: Your answer is short and informal. Avoid phrases like 'And yeah' which are not appropriate in formal speaking tests. Also, explain your preference with more details and use linking words for coherence.

예시: I prefer to be the driver because it allows me to control the speed and enjoy the journey. Moreover, driving gives me a sense of freedom.

제안: There are grammatical errors and unclear words in your answer. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, explain your actions logically using linking words.

예시: When I encounter a traffic jam, I usually try to find an alternative route to avoid the congestion so that I can reach my destination quickly.

× My father on the weekends take us on a long ride with this bike.

✓ My father on the weekends takes us on a long ride with this bike.

The subject 'My father' is third person singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'takes' instead of 'take'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English grammar.

× I like all kinds of cars but if if it is to be said specifically I would say sedans since we are owning a sedan now and it is comfortable.

✓ I like all kinds of cars but if it is to be said specifically I would say sedans since we own a sedan now and it is comfortable.

The phrase 'we are owning' is incorrect because 'own' is a stative verb and is not used in the continuous form. The correct form is 'we own'. Also, the repeated 'if' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'if'.

× I always love to be a driver since I can ride the car as fast as possible according to my wish.

✓ I always love to be a driver since I can drive the car as fast as possible according to my wish.

The verb 'ride' is not appropriate when referring to controlling a car; the correct verb is 'drive'. This is a lexical choice error rather than a modal verb issue, but since 'can' is used correctly, the main correction is the verb choice.

× If I am encounter in a traffic jam, I usually try to fou find some other way to get rid of this traffic and reach my destination as fast as possible.

✓ If I encounter a traffic jam, I usually try to find some other way to get rid of this traffic and reach my destination as fast as possible.

The phrase 'am encounter' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is the simple present tense 'encounter' after 'If I'. Also, 'fou find' seems to be a typographical error and should be corrected to 'find'.