Cars— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), you should focus on using correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. For example, use 'safe' instead of 'safety' and avoid redundancy like 'traveling to somewhere'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, I enjoyed traveling by car because it was safe and comfortable. For example, during holidays, my family usually traveled to the mountains by car, which was convenient and safe for everyone.

제안: Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Instead of 'create with a big space', say 'cars that have a lot of space'. Also, avoid filler words like 'yeah' and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: I like cars that have a lot of space because people can sit comfortably and enjoy the air conditioning, which makes the journey pleasant.

제안: Focus on correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. For example, use 'my father drives me' and 'I find it really comfortable'. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'also' properly to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer to be a passenger because when my father drives me to school, I enjoy looking out of the window. It feels comfortable and relaxing, and I can enjoy the fresh air and the scenery.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity. Use plural forms correctly, e.g., 'vehicles' instead of 'vehicle'. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'not a problem for me to achieve'. Instead, explain your feelings or actions clearly and use linking words.

예시: When there is a traffic jam, I usually wait for about 30 minutes because there are many vehicles and traffic lights in my country. I try to stay calm and patient during this time.

× Yes, when I was a kid I enjoyed traveling by car because it is safety and comfortable for traveling to somewhere.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I enjoyed traveling by car because it is safe and comfortable for traveling somewhere.

The word 'safety' is a noun but the sentence requires an adjective to describe the car. The correct adjective is 'safe'. Also, 'to somewhere' is incorrect; 'somewhere' alone is sufficient as an adverb of place.

× For example on holiday my family usually traveling to the mountain, we usually use car for the heavy call and it's safe for everyone.

✓ For example, on holidays my family usually travels to the mountains; we usually use a car for the heavy load and it's safe for everyone.

The verb 'traveling' should be 'travels' to agree with the singular subject 'my family' (third person singular). 'Mountain' should be plural 'mountains' to indicate a general place. 'Use car' needs an article 'a car'. 'Heavy call' is incorrect; likely meant 'heavy load'.

× There are so many type of car that I like, but when I enjoy the most is that it is the car that create with a big space for the people.

✓ There are so many types of cars that I like, but what I enjoy the most is a car that is created with a big space for people.

'Type' should be plural 'types' to match 'so many'. 'Car' should be plural 'cars' after 'types of'. 'When I enjoy the most' is incorrect; 'what I enjoy the most' is correct. 'Create' should be 'created' to form passive voice. 'For the people' is better as 'for people'.

× Like they can sit comfortably and yeah, they can breathe comfortably with the air conditioner, so that's not a problem.

✓ For example, people can sit comfortably and breathe easily with the air conditioner, so that's not a problem.

Using 'they' is vague here; better to specify 'people'. Repeating 'comfortably' is redundant; 'breathe easily' is more natural. 'Like' at the start is informal; 'For example' is clearer.

× I prefer to be a passenger rather than a driver because every time when my father drive me to school, I usually look out of the window of my car which I find out is really comfortable and feel relaxed.

✓ I prefer to be a passenger rather than a driver because every time my father drives me to school, I usually look out of the car window, which I find really comfortable and relaxing.

'Drive' should be 'drives' to agree with third person singular subject 'my father'. 'Look out of the window of my car' is better as 'look out of the car window'. 'Find out' is incorrect here; 'find' is correct. 'Feel relaxed' should be 'relaxing' to describe the experience.

× Also, I can enjoy that moment to see the atmosphere and exhale the wind refreshly.

✓ Also, I can enjoy that moment to see the atmosphere and breathe the fresh wind.

'Exhale the wind refreshly' is incorrect; 'breathe the fresh wind' is the correct expression. 'Refreshly' is not a proper adverb; 'fresh' is an adjective describing 'wind'.

× When there is a traffic jam, I usually wait on the road around 30 minutes because in my country there are so many vehicle and traffic lights.

✓ When there is a traffic jam, I usually wait on the road for around 30 minutes because in my country there are so many vehicles and traffic lights.

'Vehicle' should be plural 'vehicles' to match 'so many'. 'Wait on the road around 30 minutes' needs 'for' before the duration.

× So maybe I think it is not a problem for me to achieve.

✓ So maybe I think it is not a problem for me to endure.

'To achieve' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'to endure' or 'to tolerate' the traffic jam. The sentence structure is awkward and needs a verb that fits the context.