Cars— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は少し冗長で、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。例えば「very good orange」は文脈に合わず、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で自然な表現を使い、具体的な詳細を簡潔に述べることが重要です。

예시: Yes, I really enjoyed traveling by car as a child because I loved listening to music and feeling the cool air from the air conditioning. The atmosphere inside the car was always comfortable and relaxing, which made those trips memorable for me.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で、文法的な誤りや意味の通じにくい表現があります。話の流れを整理し、具体的な理由や説明を簡潔に述べることが必要です。

예시: I like sports cars because they are fast and stylish. When I was a child, I enjoyed reading a Japanese manga called Initial D, which is about racing sports cars. That made me interested in this type of car.

제안: 多くの「uh」や「umm」があり、話が途切れ途切れで理解しにくいです。文を簡潔にし、流暢に話す練習をしましょう。また、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。

예시: I prefer to be a passenger because I am not confident at driving. When I was learning to drive, it took me longer than expected to get my license, which was a frustrating experience.

제안: 「top fiction」は意味が不明で、文法的にも誤りがあります。より自然な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。

예시: When there is a traffic jam, I usually listen to my favorite music because it helps me stay calm and pass the time more enjoyably.

× I loved the time of a car traveling and that's mainly because I liked to watch and take on the car because the atmosphere was very unique and comfortable.

✓ I loved the time of traveling by car and that's mainly because I liked to watch and ride in the car because the atmosphere was very unique and comfortable.

The phrase 'a car traveling' is incorrect; 'traveling by car' is the correct form. Also, 'take on the car' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'ride in the car'. The verb 'traveling' should be used as a gerund after 'time of' to indicate the activity.

× I liked to watch and take on the car because the atmosphere was very unique and comfortable.

✓ I liked to watch and ride in the car because the atmosphere was very unique and comfortable.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to being inside a car. Also, 'take on the car' is not a correct phrase; 'ride in the car' is appropriate.

× Uh, some music and umm, very good orange.

✓ Uh, some music and umm, very good orange scent.

The word 'orange' is a noun or adjective but here it is unclear. Adding 'scent' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'very good' modifies 'orange' but needs a noun to complete the phrase.

× I like sports cars because when I was a child there were very famous among the books in Japan.

✓ I like sports cars because when I was a child they were very famous among the books in Japan.

The subject 'sports cars' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' instead of 'there'. 'There' is used for existence, not as a pronoun referring to people or things.

× The name is Initial D and this is a story about how to drive well by using a sports car.

✓ The name is Initial D and it is a story about how to drive well by using a sports car.

The pronoun 'this' is less appropriate here; 'it' refers back to 'Initial D' correctly as a singular noun.

× And I remember our names of the new car.

✓ And I remember the names of the new cars.

'Our names' is incorrect here; the speaker likely means 'the names' of the new cars. Also, 'car' should be plural 'cars' if referring to multiple names.

× I prefer to a passenger because I'm not good at uh, uh, driving my car, umm, because, uh, when I was a student, uh, I had to extra two days to, uh, get the car license.

✓ I prefer to be a passenger because I'm not good at driving my car, because when I was a student, I had to spend two extra days to get the car license.

The phrase 'prefer to a passenger' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to be a passenger'. Also, 'had to extra two days' is incorrect; 'had to spend two extra days' is correct.

× I had to extra two days to, uh, get the car license.

✓ I had to spend two extra days to get the car license.

The verb 'extra' is not used correctly here. The correct verb is 'spend' to indicate time used.

× And that was, umm, very bad memory for me because I couldn't graduate, uh, car school in time.

✓ And that was a very bad memory for me because I couldn't graduate from car school in time.

The verb 'graduate' requires the preposition 'from' when referring to a school. Also, 'car school' is a noun phrase and needs 'from' to be grammatically correct.

× I always listen to my favorite music when I'm in the top fiction, and that's mainly because I can't do anything about dealing with the situation of traffic jams and so there are nothing to do without listening music carefully.

✓ I always listen to my favorite music when I'm in a traffic jam, and that's mainly because I can't do anything about dealing with the situation of traffic jams, so there is nothing to do but listen to music carefully.

The phrase 'in the top fiction' is incorrect; it should be 'in a traffic jam'. Also, 'there are nothing' is incorrect; it should be 'there is nothing'. The phrase 'without listening music' is incorrect; it should be 'but listen to music' or 'except listening to music'.