Cars— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use past tense consistently when talking about past experiences, and avoid short, disconnected sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'Because my mind has changed a lot,' say 'However, my preferences have changed over time.'

예시: When I was a kid, I enjoyed traveling by train rather than by car. However, my preferences have changed over time, and now I prefer to travel by car because it is more convenient for me.

제안: Answer the question directly by naming types of cars you like, and avoid mixing unrelated information. Use clear sentences and linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I like compact cars because they are easy to drive and park. However, I usually travel by bus because I don't own a car.

제안: Try to avoid hesitations and unclear words. Use complete sentences and explain your reasons clearly with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I prefer to be a passenger because I don't know how to drive. Also, I feel more relaxed when someone else is driving.

제안: Avoid short, fragmented sentences and unclear phrases. Use proper verb forms and linking words to make your answer more natural and coherent.

예시: When there is a traffic jam, I usually use my mobile phone to browse social media because there is nothing else I can do. I think many people do the same in such situations.

× When I was a kid, I enjoy traveling by train rather than car.

✓ When I was a kid, I enjoyed traveling by train rather than by car.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a kid'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'enjoyed' instead of the present tense 'enjoy'. Also, 'by car' should be preceded by 'by' for parallel structure.

× I know a training is more saver, but now I prefer cars.

✓ I know that traveling is safer, but now I prefer cars.

The word 'training' is incorrect; it should be 'traveling'. Also, 'more saver' is incorrect; 'safer' is the correct comparative form. The article 'a' before 'training' is unnecessary. The sentence also needs 'that' to connect the clauses properly.

× Most of my travels are done by buses but I prefer to travel in car but unfortunately I'm forced to tour take a bus to travel.

✓ Most of my travels are done by bus, but I prefer to travel by car; unfortunately, I'm forced to take a bus to travel.

'Buses' is correct, but 'by buses' is less common than 'by bus' when referring to transportation in general. 'In car' should be 'by car'. The phrase 'tour take a bus' is incorrect; it should be 'take a bus'. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.

× To be honest, I prefer to be a passenger as well as the I don't. Know how to drive so I am forced in to be a passenger. Anne.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to be a passenger because I don't know how to drive, so I am forced to be a passenger.

The phrase 'as well as the I don't. Know' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'because I don't know'. 'In to be' should be 'to be'. The name 'Anne' seems out of place and is removed for clarity.

× Additionally, I think I don't like to be a driver.

✓ Additionally, I think I don't like being a driver.

After 'like', the gerund form 'being' is preferred over the infinitive 'to be' when expressing preferences.

× Nothing. What could I do? I bring my mobile phone and browsing social media like a universe and. Would do the same I think. We cannot do anything else.

✓ Nothing. What can I do? I bring my mobile phone and browse social media like Instagram. I think others would do the same. We cannot do anything else.

The sentence has several issues: 'I bring' should be 'I bring' but followed by 'browse' (not 'browsing') to maintain parallel structure. 'Like a universe and.' is unclear; likely meant 'like Instagram'. 'Would do the same I think' needs reordering to 'I think others would do the same'. The overall sentence structure is fragmented and needs correction for clarity.