Cars— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and grammatical errors to make your response natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed traveling by car when I was a kid because I could listen to my favourite music. Moreover, the car rides were comfortable and helped me to relax during long journeys.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear opinion about the types of cars you like, and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I prefer small and fuel-efficient cars because they are easier to drive and park in the city. Additionally, they are more environmentally friendly compared to larger vehicles.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Clearly state your preference and explain why, using simple and correct sentences. Use linking words to add supporting details.

예시: I definitely prefer to be a passenger because my driving skills are not very good. Also, being a passenger allows me to relax and enjoy the journey without worrying about the road.

제안: Your answer should be clearer and more structured. Directly answer the question and provide specific details about what you do during traffic jams. Use linking words to make your response coherent.

예시: When there is a traffic jam, I usually bring a book to read because it helps me pass the time. I find reading more enjoyable than just waiting in the car.

× I think however that why HA is make me happy because I can listen music.

✓ I think, however, that HA makes me happy because I can listen to music.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular present tense 'makes' to agree with the subject 'HA'. Also, 'listen music' requires the preposition 'to' after 'listen'.

× I think however that why HA is make me happy because I can listen music.

✓ I think, however, that HA makes me happy because I can listen to music.

The verb 'listen' is usually followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to music or sounds, so 'listen music' should be 'listen to music'.

× Along with the long way, additionally, I think her is convenient to me, very comfort and help me to relax it.

✓ Along the long journey, I think it is convenient for me, very comfortable, and helps me to relax.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used; it should be 'it' referring to the journey or car. Also, 'comfort' should be the adjective 'comfortable'. The phrase 'help me to relax it' is incorrect; 'help me to relax' suffices without 'it'.

× Along with the long way, additionally, I think her is convenient to me, very comfort and help me to relax it.

✓ Along the long journey, I think it is convenient for me, very comfortable, and helps me to relax.

The phrase 'convenient to me' should be 'convenient for me' as 'convenient' is followed by 'for' when indicating suitability or benefit.

× I'm not sure but.

✓ I'm not sure.

The phrase 'I'm not sure but.' is incomplete and awkward. Removing 'but' makes the sentence complete and clear.

× I don't think that high of card.

✓ I don't think much of cars.

The phrase 'high of card' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or misuse. 'I don't think much of cars' is a clearer expression meaning the speaker does not have strong preferences.

× Is Lily ready? Convenient to me?

✓ Is it ready? Is it convenient for me?

The sentences lack subjects and proper structure. Adding 'Is it' clarifies the questions. Also, 'convenient to me' should be 'convenient for me'.

× Definitely passenger adding my die skill is very bad so I love to become a persons are an open with you all to what? Along with it dawned journey.

✓ Definitely a passenger because my driving skills are very bad, so I love to be a passenger on an open journey.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect pronouns and phrases. 'Die skill' should be 'driving skills'. 'Become a persons are an open with you all to what?' is unclear and corrected to 'be a passenger on an open journey' to make sense.

× I bring some book to read because I think traffic them is balling so.

✓ I bring some books to read because I think traffic is boring.

'Some book' should be plural 'some books' to match the quantifier 'some'. 'Traffic them is balling' is incorrect; likely intended 'traffic is boring'.

× I bring some book to read because I think traffic them is balling so.

✓ I bring some books to read because I think traffic is boring.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used after 'traffic'. 'Traffic' is uncountable and does not take 'them'.

× Is worth my time for long time, so I need to spend my time if Leslie sleeping about is helping me to spend my time effects.

✓ It is worth my time for a long time, so I need to spend my time. If Leslie is sleeping, it helps me to pass the time effectively.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding subjects and verbs clarifies meaning. 'Leslie sleeping about is helping me to spend my time effects' is corrected to 'If Leslie is sleeping, it helps me to pass the time effectively' for clarity and correctness.