Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific details about your friend or your friendship. Use correct grammar, for example, 'I have known' instead of 'I known'.

예시: Yes, I have a friend whom I have known since school. His name is Sridhar Ahmed, and we have shared many memorable moments together over the years.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about activities you do with friends. Also, use correct verb forms and sentence structure.

예시: In our free time, we usually study together, play sports, or sometimes just relax and chat about our interests.

제안: Avoid redundancy and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Specify the type of restaurants or places you meet to add detail.

예시: We usually meet at a restaurant nearby that we all like because it is convenient and comfortable for everyone.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on answering the question directly and provide reasons or examples. Use correct grammar and avoid irrelevant information.

예시: Yes, I often go out with my friends, especially on weekends, because I enjoy spending time with them and relaxing outside.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Be specific about why friends are important to you and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: My friends are very important to me because they support me during difficult times and always care about my well-being.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more natural. Use linking words to explain your preference and provide reasons.

예시: It depends on the situation, but I usually prefer spending time with one close friend because we can have deeper conversations.

제안: Improve sentence flow and avoid redundancy. Provide reasons why you invite friends home and use linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I often invite my close friends to my home because I enjoy spending quality time with them in a comfortable environment.

× Yes, I have a friend that I known for a long time and it's my school time friend and his name is Sridhar Ahmed and that is the friend that I have known for a long time.

✓ Yes, I have a friend that I have known for a long time and he's my school-time friend. His name is Sridhar Ahmed and he is the friend that I have known for a long time.

The verb 'known' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. The original sentence missed 'have' before 'known'. Also, 'school time friend' should be 'school-time friend' as a compound adjective. This correction ensures proper tense and clarity.

× In our free times I am leaving. I am really going in some important works, likes about studies, about sports and something about that I am not sure.

✓ In our free time, I am living. I am really engaged in some important work, like studies, sports, and other things, but I am not sure about that.

'Free times' should be 'free time' as 'time' is uncountable here. 'I am leaving' is incorrect; likely intended 'I am living' or 'I am spending time'. 'Likes' should be 'like' to introduce examples. 'Works' should be 'work' as uncountable. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct present tense usage.

× I think that I usually often meet in some restaurants that I decided and and we often meet at the same place.

✓ I think that I usually meet at some restaurants that I have decided on, and we often meet at the same place.

The verb 'meet' is followed by 'at' for places. 'Decided' requires the preposition 'on' when referring to choices. 'Usually often' is redundant; 'usually' suffices. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition use and clarity.

× Yes, I often go out with my friends because my parents are those person who likes me and I spend most of my time with those.

✓ Yes, I often go out with my friends because my parents are the kind of people who like me, and I spend most of my time with them.

'Those person' is incorrect; 'person' is singular, so it should be 'people' for plural. 'Likes' should be 'like' to agree with plural 'people'. 'Those' is incorrect as a pronoun here; 'them' is appropriate. The sentence is corrected for pronoun and subject-verb agreement.

× My friends are very important to me because this is these are the persons who are careful, careful about me, and I like very much about them.

✓ My friends are very important to me because they are the people who care about me, and I like them very much.

'This is these are' is redundant and incorrect; 'they are' is appropriate. 'Persons' is less common; 'people' is preferred. 'Careful about me' should be 'care about me'. 'I like very much about them' is incorrect; 'I like them very much' is correct. The sentence is corrected for plural forms and clarity.

× Most of the time it depends upon on the friend and because it if it the friend is the closest. So I think that I spend time with 1 friend.

✓ Most of the time, it depends on the friend because if the friend is the closest, I think I spend time with one friend.

'Depends upon on' is redundant; 'depends on' is correct. The conjunctions are misused and the sentence is fragmented. The sentence is restructured for proper conjunction use and clarity.

× Yes, of course. And because most of the friends that are very close to me, so I would invite friends in our home.

✓ Yes, of course. Because most of my friends are very close to me, I would invite them to my home.

'Invite friends in our home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' for inviting someone to a place. 'Most of the friends that are' should be 'most of my friends are'. The sentence is corrected for preposition and pronoun use.