Friends— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to make your sentences complete and clear, and avoid repetition. For example, you can say: "Yes, I have a lifelong friend named Anita. We've known each other since kindergarten, and she has always encouraged me to work harder because she has strong work ethics."

예시: Yes, I have a lifelong friend named Anita. We've known each other since kindergarten, and she has always encouraged me to work harder because she has strong work ethics.

제안: Your answer is good but a bit long and could be clearer with better linking words. Try to use linking words like "so" or "therefore" to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example: "As we are both students, we don't have much time to meet during the week, so we usually hang out on weekends. We often go to cafes or cinemas to enjoy each other's company and have conversations."

예시: As we are both students, we don't have much time to meet during the week, so we usually hang out on weekends. We often go to cafes or cinemas to enjoy each other's company and have conversations.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more precise linking words and avoiding repetition. For example, you can say: "We often meet at cafes or cinemas where we enjoy each other's company, catch up on recent events, and share advice."

예시: We often meet at cafes or cinemas where we enjoy each other's company, catch up on recent events, and share advice.

제안: Your answer is good but informal with "Yep" and could be more structured. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words. For example: "Yes, I often go out with my friends because we prefer outdoor activities. We enjoy experiencing the liveliness of the town and meeting new people since we are sociable."

예시: Yes, I often go out with my friends because we prefer outdoor activities. We enjoy experiencing the liveliness of the town and meeting new people since we are sociable.

제안: Your answer has a good idea but is incomplete and a bit unclear. Try to complete your sentences and explain your points more clearly. For example: "Friends are very important to me because they provide emotional support. Nowadays, technology can make people feel lonelier, so having close friendships is essential for happiness."

예시: Friends are very important to me because they provide emotional support. Nowadays, technology can make people feel lonelier, so having close friendships is essential for happiness.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to make your sentences complete and use linking words. For example: "I prefer spending time with my best friend rather than a group because we have a deeper relationship. Therefore, we can discuss more personal matters."

예시: I prefer spending time with my best friend rather than a group because we have a deeper relationship. Therefore, we can discuss more personal matters.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains errors and incomplete thoughts. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. For example: "My home is my comfort zone where I feel peaceful. Since I spend most of my time there, I prefer not to have many visitors because it can affect my energy."

예시: My home is my comfort zone where I feel peaceful. Since I spend most of my time there, I prefer not to have many visitors because it can affect my energy.

× She's been my friend since we were in kindergarten and she had. Encouraged me to work harder because she's she has work ethics.

✓ She's been my friend since we were in kindergarten and she has encouraged me to work harder because she has work ethics.

The phrase 'she had. Encouraged' incorrectly splits the sentence and uses past perfect 'had' unnecessarily. The correct form is present perfect 'has encouraged' to indicate an action continuing up to now.

× she's she has work ethics.

✓ she has work ethics.

The phrase 'she's she has' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'she has' to maintain clarity and correctness.

× As we both are students we don't have much time to meet each other but we try to hang out at weekends and we usually go to cafes or cinemas to enjoy our each others company and we talk.

✓ As we are both students, we don't have much time to meet each other, but we try to hang out on weekends and usually go to cafes or cinemas to enjoy each other's company and talk.

The original sentence is a run-on with missing commas and incorrect phrase 'our each others company'. Correct punctuation and possessive form 'each other's' improve clarity and grammar.

× to enjoy our each others company

✓ to enjoy each other's company

The phrase 'our each others company' is incorrect. The correct possessive form is 'each other's company' to indicate mutual possession.

× to tell each other and give each other pieces of advice.

✓ to tell each other things and give each other pieces of advice.

The verb 'tell' requires an object; adding 'things' clarifies what is being told, improving sentence completeness.

× so we usually go outside of the house to feel the liveliness of the town and meet other people as we are so sociable.

✓ so we usually go outside the house to feel the liveliness of the town and meet other people as we are so sociable.

The preposition 'outside of' is less common and often unnecessary; 'outside the house' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× Having a shoulder to cry on is the most important thing in people's lives these days as technology has made people lonelier than before, so friendships are a good.

✓ Having a shoulder to cry on is the most important thing in people's lives these days as technology has made people lonelier than before, so friendships are good.

The phrase 'friendships are a good' is incomplete and incorrect. Removing 'a' corrects the noun phrase to 'friendships are good'.

× I prefer to spend time with my best friend rather than a group of friends because we have a deeper relationship than with others so we can talk about more personal. Things in our lives to each other.

✓ I prefer to spend time with my best friend rather than a group of friends because we have a deeper relationship than with others, so we can talk about more personal things in our lives with each other.

The original sentence is fragmented and has misplaced periods. Combining the fragments and correcting prepositions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× My home is my comfort zone, this is where I find piercing and is the most important thing in my life as I spend most of my time here. So I don't like others to come and go because I feel that they their energy.

✓ My home is my comfort zone; this is where I find peace and it is the most important thing in my life as I spend most of my time here. So I don't like others to come and go because I feel that they drain my energy.

The word 'piercing' is incorrect; likely intended 'peace'. Also, 'they their energy' is incomplete; corrected to 'they drain my energy' for clarity and correctness.