Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子结构混乱，时态和冠词使用错误，内容不够具体。建议先用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句具体描述广告内容和为什么印象深刻，并使用连接词使表达流畅。例如说明广告里的场景、角色或特殊效果，以及你的感受和原因。注意冠词（a/an/the）和时态的一致性。

예시: Yes. A chewing-gum commercial impressed me when I was a child. It featured a boy who blew enormous bubbles with a special gum, and the colorful animation made it memorable. I remember feeling amazed because the bubble seemed unreal and everyone around him cheered.

제안: 回答直接但信息不够具体，句子有语法和搭配错误。建议开头用主题句肯定回答，再用一到两句具体说明常见广告类型并举例说明你受到影响的情况。使用连接词（for example, such as, because）提高连贯性。注意复数和动词形式的一致。

예시: Yes, I see many ads on buses and subways. They usually promote everyday products like shampoo and local restaurants, and I often notice banners near stations because I use those routes every day. For example, a subway poster once reminded me to try a nearby noodle shop.

제안: 表达含混，逻辑不清，时态和词序错误。建议先简短明确地回答喜欢与否，然后解释原因并给出具体例子说明广告如何影响你的选择。使用连接词（because, so, for example）并注意动词形式。

예시: Not really. I find ads can influence my choices because I tend to buy brands I often see advertised. For example, after seeing many TV commercials for a certain biscuit, I bought it even though I had never tried it before.

제안: 表达重复且不够准确。建议先明确喜欢的广告类型（如情感类、故事类或视觉效果强的广告），然后用一两句具体说明原因并举例。使用简洁的句子和连接词（because, such as, which）增强逻辑。

예시: I prefer emotional commercials with vivid visuals. For example, I like ads that tell a short story with colorful footage because they make me feel connected to the product and remember it longer.

제안: 句子不通顺，表达不清楚。建议先回答频率，然后说明你如何避免广告（比如使用广告拦截器或付费订阅），并给出具体情况。注意使用正确短语（turn off, block, remove）和代词的一致性。

예시: Not really. I usually block ads on my phone and computer because they interrupt my browsing. For instance, I installed an ad blocker on my browser and I also pay for an ad-free version of some apps.

× Is there was a advertisement about the gun, the chewing gum, which makes the deep impression of my childhood because it can use the chewing gum to make a big bubble.

✓ There was an advertisement about a gun and chewing gum that left a deep impression on my childhood because you could use the gum to make a big bubble.

错误类型：存在句型（There be）和句子结构混乱。问题包括“Is there was”混合了疑问与陈述，应选择一种；冠词错误（a advertisement 应为 an advertisement）；并列名词结构不清晰（gun, the chewing gum）以及关系从句和动词用法不当（which makes the deep impression → that left a deep impression；it can use the chewing gum → you could use the gum）。建议：选择陈述或疑问句式一致，注意冠词前元音发音(an)，并用简单的关系代词that或which连接，动词时态与意思一致。

× That was amazing.

✓ That was amazing.

此句语法正确，时态与上下文一致，保持原句即可。没有需要改动的语法问题。

× Yes, I always see some advertisements on the bus or the subway.

✓ Yes, I always see some advertisements on buses or on the subway.

错误类型：介词和复数使用不精确。公交车通常用复数buses，且在列举交通工具时可在每项前加介词on保持一致性（on buses or on the subway）。建议使用复数形式指泛指，并保持介词使用一致。

× It shows the different products.

✓ They show different products.

错误类型：句子结构与主谓不一致。advertisements为复数，主语应为they；the different products中的定冠词不必要，表示泛指用different products。建议主谓一致并去掉多余定冠词。

× That's where I usually use, such as the shampoo or the restaurant that we often go.

✓ Those are the things I usually use or visit, such as shampoo or restaurants that we often go to.

错误类型：代词和指代不清，以及句子不完整。原句的where不适用于物品列举；缺少动词或不定结构；restaurant 后需接介词go to。建议用Those/These 指代事物，补全动词，并在go后加介词to。

× Actually no, because I believe that watching much advertisement would influence my decision.

✓ Actually no, because I believe that watching many advertisements would influence my decisions.

错误类型：量词使用不当。advertisement作为可数名词应使用复数many advertisements或a lot of advertisements，而不是much。decision通常可用复数decisions表示多次决定。建议区分可数与不可数名词并使用正确量词。

× When I buying something I always choose the one I used to see used to saw on the advertisement.

✓ When I buy something, I always choose the one I used to see in the advertisement.

错误类型：动名词/分词使用混乱和时态错误。buying前缺少助动词或应使用一般现在时buy；句中重复并错误地使用 used to saw，正确表达为used to see或simply saw，且介词用in或on the advertisement。建议使用When I buy（习惯性动作用一般现在时），并用used to see或saw来表达曾在广告中见过。

× Well, I like the advertisements which shows the which has the colorful video on that and which makes my have the same emotion of the of that product.

✓ Well, I like advertisements that show colorful videos and evoke the same emotions as the product.

错误类型：关系从句使用错误、动词形式和冗余词汇。advertisements为复数，关系从句中动词应为show（而不是shows）；句中有重复的which/that和结构混乱（makes my have the same emotion of the of that product）。建议简化为that show ... and evoke the same emotions as the product，注意主谓一致并用evoke表达引起情感。

× Actually, no, I don't like to see the advertisements everywhere, so I abandoned them to show on my or my computer.

✓ Actually, no. I don't like to see advertisements everywhere, so I disabled them from showing on my phone or my computer.

错误类型：情态或动词选择及句子结构错误。原句用abandoned不合适，应该用disable或turn off来表达“屏蔽、关闭广告”；短语show on my or my computer语序和词缺失（phone缺失）。建议使用disable/turn off + object, 并明确设备名称（phone）。