Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够自然，且内容较为模糊。建议直接回答问题，使用更准确的时态和词汇，并具体说明印象深刻的广告内容。

예시: Yes, I remember a charity advertisement about helping children in need. It was very touching and made a strong impression on me because it showed how small actions can make a big difference.

제안: 回答较为直接，但表达不够流畅，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains, planes, and taxis. This is quite common nowadays because companies want to reach people while they travel.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

예시: I don't really like most advertisements. However, I appreciate those that introduce useful products I need, but I dislike ads for things that don't interest me.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法错误影响理解。建议明确表达喜欢的广告类型，并解释原因，使用恰当词汇。

예시: I prefer charitable advertisements because they educate people and promote mental health awareness among children.

제안: 表达不够自然，语法和词汇使用不当。建议用更地道的表达描述网络广告的频繁出现，并表达个人感受。

예시: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements online, especially when I watch short videos on TikTok. Sometimes, I find them quite annoying.

× Yes, when I was a child there were so many advertisements in the TV.

✓ Yes, when I was a child there were so many advertisements on TV.

介词使用错误，应该用on TV表示在电视上，而不是in the TV。这里属于介词使用错误，符合语法问题类型11。

× Both are commercial and charitable.

✓ Both are commercial and charitable advertisements.

句子缺少名词，导致表达不完整。需要补充名词advertisements，使句子完整。属于句子结构错误，类型26。

× Both of them improved me very much and I can remember it since now.

✓ Both of them influenced me very much and I can remember them until now.

动词improved用法不当，应使用influenced表示影响。'since now'用法错误，应为'until now'。此外，'it'指代不明确，应改为'them'指代复数。属于句子结构错误，类型26。

× I have seen a lot of advertisements in the transportation such as trains, planes and even taxis.

✓ I have seen a lot of advertisements on transportation such as trains, planes and even taxis.

介词使用错误，应该用on transportation表示在交通工具上，而不是in the transportation。属于介词使用错误，类型11。

× I think it's so usual situation for us to see varieties of advertisements.

✓ I think it's a usual situation for us to see a variety of advertisements.

'so usual situation'表达不自然，应为'a usual situation'。'varieties of advertisements'应为'a variety of advertisements'。属于量词使用错误，类型14。

× If they are about functions or products I needed, I think that's a good way to realize them.

✓ If they are about functions or products I need, I think that's a good way to learn about them.

时态错误，'needed'应为现在时'need'。'realize'用法不当，应为'learn about'或'know about'。属于时态错误，类型6和词汇用法错误。

× But they are for the things I don't need, such as ones I wouldn't like them.

✓ But they are for things I don't need, such as ones I wouldn't like.

'such as ones I wouldn't like them'中'ones'和'them'重复，应该去掉'them'。属于代词使用错误，类型12。

× It seems to me that I like charitable advertising most, mainly because they have the education functions and have a mental health in the children of other people.

✓ It seems to me that I like charitable advertising most, mainly because they have educational functions and promote mental health in other people's children.

'education functions'应为'aducational functions'，'have a mental health'表达错误，应为'promote mental health'。属于形容词和词汇使用错误，类型13。

× Yes, definitely there are so many advertisements in Internet situation, mainly because when I stroll short videos in TikTok, I would find so many advertising about a variety of things.

✓ Yes, definitely there are so many advertisements on the Internet, mainly because when I scroll through short videos on TikTok, I find so many advertisements about a variety of things.

介词使用错误，应该用'on the Internet'和'on TikTok'。'stroll'用词错误，应为'scroll'。'advertising'应为复数'advertisements'。属于介词和词汇使用错误，类型11和13。

× I think it's abhorrent for me.

✓ I think it's annoying for me.

'abhorrent'用法不当，通常形容令人厌恶的事物，口语中更常用'annoying'表示烦人。属于形容词使用错误，类型13。