Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve fluency by speaking more smoothly. Also, provide more specific details about the advertisement to make your answer more engaging and clear. For example, mention what kind of clothes or styles impressed you and why.

예시: Yes, one advertisement that impressed me as a child was for a clothing brand that showcased trendy and colourful outfits. I loved it because I was always interested in fashion and the ad inspired me to try new styles.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words and correcting minor grammar errors. Also, try to be more specific about the types of advertisements you see and why companies choose these locations.

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and other public transport. This is because companies know these places have high foot traffic, so they use them to reach a large number of potential customers effectively.

제안: Avoid grammatical errors such as subject-verb agreement and use more precise vocabulary. Also, explain your opinion with specific reasons or examples to strengthen your answer.

예시: No, I don't like advertisements because they often mislead people by exaggerating the benefits of products, which can cause disappointment when the product doesn't meet expectations.

제안: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' to improve fluency. Also, use more natural phrasing and provide a clearer explanation with examples to make your answer more effective.

예시: I prefer advertisements that provide honest and accurate information about products, so customers can make informed decisions. For instance, ads that clearly explain the features and benefits without exaggeration are more trustworthy.

제안: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Also, explain your answer more clearly by describing how your busy schedule affects your attention to advertisements.

예시: I don't often notice advertisements on my phone or computer because I'm usually busy with work and don't pay much attention to them. Therefore, I find these ads unnecessary in my daily routine.

× It was the advertisement about the clothes, because I am I am very fond of of clothes, new styles.

✓ It was the advertisement about clothes, because I am very fond of clothes and new styles.

The word 'clothes' is already plural, so 'the clothes' is unnecessary here. Also, the phrase 'fond of of clothes' contains a repeated preposition 'of'. Removing the extra 'the' and duplicate 'of' corrects the plural usage and improves sentence clarity.

× Yes, I always see a lot of advertisement on trains and other transport because the companies know there are lot of people surrounding the the transport so they always publish their ads on such areas.

✓ Yes, I always see a lot of advertisements on trains and other transport because the companies know there are lots of people surrounding the transport so they always publish their ads in such areas.

The word 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'a lot of'. Also, 'lot of people' should be 'lots of people' for correct quantifier usage. The repeated 'the the' is a typographical error. Preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to areas inside transport.

× No, I do not like the advertisements because they always misguides the person and give the misrepresentation about the product.

✓ No, I do not like the advertisements because they always misguide the person and give misrepresentations about the product.

The verb 'misguides' is incorrectly conjugated after 'they' which requires plural verb 'misguide'. Also, 'give the misrepresentation' is better expressed as 'give misrepresentations' without the definite article to indicate general cases.

× I like the advertisement, uh, in which the company give the true and fair, uh, information about the product, uh, so every customer can, uh, get awareness about, uh, the product from these advertisements.

✓ I like advertisements in which the company gives true and fair information about the product, so every customer can get awareness about the product from these advertisements.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to generalize. The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'company'. The definite article 'the' before 'true and fair information' is unnecessary. Removing filler words improves clarity.

× I do not often see advertisement when I am on my phone or computer because I have no time to see in the advertisement.

✓ I do not often see advertisements when I am on my phone or computer because I have no time to look at advertisements.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'see'. The phrase 'see in the advertisement' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'look at advertisements'. This corrects both plural and preposition usage.

× I do not often see advertisement when I am on my phone or computer because I have no time to see in the advertisement.

✓ I do not often see advertisements when I am on my phone or computer because I have no time to look at advertisements.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'see'. The correct preposition is 'at' when referring to looking at advertisements. Also, 'see' is better replaced with 'look at' for natural expression.