Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免拼写错误，如"ice catching"应为"eye-catching"。同时，回答应更自然流畅，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I remember a colorful advertisement from my childhood about candies produced at the end of a rainbow. It was very eye-catching and left a strong impression on me.

제안: 回答中有很多犹豫词和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议减少填充词，使用正确的词汇，如"see"而非"say"，并且句子结构应完整且连贯。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains, especially for alcohol. These ads are usually displayed inside the train compartments.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I like advertisements because I study marketing, and I often pay attention to ads that can help me improve my professional skills.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误，如"a emotional person"应为"an emotional person"。建议使用更自然的表达，并适当扩展细节。

예시: I like advertisements that tell a story because I am an emotional person. I enjoy brand stories that focus on feelings and moods.

제안: 回答中存在严重语法和词汇错误，如"say advertisements"应为"see advertisements"，"strange my phone"表达不明。建议多练习基础表达，确保句子通顺。

예시: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone and computer. For example, when I unlock my phone, I usually see ads for various apps or tools.

× Of course, I still remember a commercial from my childhood which is told about the geography at the rainbow and produce the candies.

✓ Of course, I still remember a commercial from my childhood which talks about the geography of the rainbow and produces candies.

句中使用了错误的动词形式“is told”，应使用主动语态的现在时“talks”，因为广告在描述内容。动词“produce”应改为第三人称单数形式“produces”，与主语“commercial”一致。

× I think it's very colorful and ice catching.

✓ I think it's very colorful and eye-catching.

“ice catching”是错误的表达，应为“eye-catching”，意为“吸引眼球的”，这是一个固定搭配。

× Of course, I see the number of, uh, commercial on the trains, uh, especially, uh, alcohol advertisements, umm, and I usually say the advertisements, uh, in the evaporator.

✓ Of course, I see a number of commercials on the trains, especially alcohol advertisements, and I usually see the advertisements in the elevator.

“commercial”应为复数形式“commercials”，因为表示多个广告。短语“a number of”后应接复数名词。动词“say”用错，应为“see”，表示“看到”。“evaporator”应为“elevator”，意思是电梯。

× Of course, I really like advertisements because my major is marketing and I often, uh, I often to focus on the advertisements which can improve our, umm, professional skills about marketing.

✓ Of course, I really like advertisements because my major is marketing and I often focus on advertisements which can improve our professional marketing skills.

“I often to focus”中“to”多余，应去掉。动词“focus”后不加“on the advertisements”中的冠词“the”，因为泛指广告。

× I'd like the story advertisement because I'm a emotional person so I always focus on the brand stories or some products focus on the moods.

✓ I'd like story advertisements because I'm an emotional person, so I always focus on brand stories or some products that focus on moods.

“a emotional”应为“an emotional”，因为“emotional”以元音音素开头，冠词用“an”。“the story advertisement”改为复数“story advertisements”，更符合语境。

× I often say advertisements when I use, use my phone and, uh, computer, umm, for example, uh, when I, when I uh, strange my phone, I always see the toolbox advertisements.

✓ I often see advertisements when I use my phone and computer. For example, when I unlock my phone, I always see toolbox advertisements.

“say advertisements”应为“see advertisements”，表示“看到广告”。“strange my phone”是错误表达，应为“unlock my phone”，表示“解锁手机”。