Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且句子结构不完整。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免语法错误，同时增加连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: When I was a child, I saw a chocolate advertisement that impressed me a lot. It showed the chocolate's delicious taste and attractive appearance, which really appealed to me. Because of this, I really wanted to try it, but my parents thought it was unhealthy for me.

제안: 回答内容较简单，表达不够准确，存在语法和词汇错误。建议使用更准确的词汇，注意句子结构，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on subways and buses in my city. For example, when I take the subway, I notice ads for various products such as perfumes, food, and electronic devices.

제안: 回答中句子不完整且表达不清晰，建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯，使用适当的连接词，并避免重复。

예시: It depends on the situation. For example, I like advertisements that introduce interesting features because they help me decide what to buy. However, I dislike ads that interrupt videos or TV shows because they are annoying.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议注意句子完整性，使用正确的语法结构，并丰富内容使表达更具体。

예시: I prefer advertisements that tell interesting and creative stories. Nowadays, many ads only focus on basic functions, which I find boring. When I see ads with wonderful stories, I feel more engaged and interested.

제안: 回答较为完整，但存在语法和表达上的小错误。建议注意主谓一致和词汇搭配，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Absolutely yes. I often see many advertisements when I scroll through my phone or computer. For example, on social media platforms like TikTok or Facebook, there are many ads related to my interests that introduce various products and their functions.

× This advertisement introduced is taste and it's appearance that's really appealed to me.

✓ This advertisement introduced its taste and its appearance that really appealed to me.

这里的错误是使用了错误的代词“is”代替“its”，导致句子意思不清。应使用“its”表示“它的”，指代广告的味道和外观。

× So when I was young I really want to try this chocolate but my parents thought is bad for my.

✓ So when I was young I really wanted to try this chocolate but my parents thought it was bad for me.

这里“want”应使用过去时“wanted”，因为描述的是过去的事情；“thought is bad for my”中缺少主语，且“my”应为宾格“me”，应改为“thought it was bad for me”。

× Yeah, I saw many advertisements on subways or buses in my city.

✓ Yeah, I saw many advertisements on the subway or buses in my city.

“subways”通常指地铁系统的整体，单数形式“subway”更常用；同时“the subway”表示特定的交通工具。

× For example, when I took the subway to some destinations, I always thought there a lot of advertisements like Pierre and food and electronic device.

✓ For example, when I took the subway to some destinations, I always thought there were a lot of advertisements like perfume, food, and electronic devices.

“there a lot of advertisements”缺少动词，应为“there were a lot of advertisements”；“Pierre”应为“perfume”（香水），且“electronic device”应为复数“electronic devices”。

× It depends on the situations.

✓ It depends on the situation.

“situations”复数在此处不合适，通常说“depends on the situation”表示取决于具体情况。

× For example, if I saw the advertisements which introduced some interesting functions, maybe I will like this advertisement because it can help me to make some decision to buy some interesting things.

✓ For example, if I see advertisements that introduce some interesting functions, maybe I will like these advertisements because they can help me make some decisions to buy interesting things.

条件句应使用现在时“if I see”，而非过去时“if I saw”；“advertisements”复数应对应“these advertisements”和“they”；“make some decision”应为复数“make some decisions”。

× But if the advertisements which interrupt some videos or TV show.

✓ But if the advertisements interrupt some videos or TV shows, I don't like them.

原句缺少主句，导致句子不完整，应补充完整表达。

× I prefer advertising with a very interesting stories or more creative, just because nowadays more and more advertisements also like to introduce their basic functions and I think it's very boring

✓ I prefer advertising with very interesting stories or more creativity, just because nowadays more and more advertisements like to introduce their basic functions and I think it's very boring.

“a very interesting stories”中“a”与复数“stories”不匹配，应去掉“a”；“more creative”应改为名词形式“more creativity”；“also like”中“also”位置不当，应去掉。

× When I captured some advertisements which have a very wonderful stories, I.

✓ When I see some advertisements which have very wonderful stories, I feel interested.

“captured”用法不当，应为“see”；“a very wonderful stories”中“a”与复数不匹配，应去掉“a”；句子不完整，需补充谓语。

× I always see many advertisements when I scroll my phone and computers that introduce their functions and products.

✓ I always see many advertisements when I scroll through my phone and computer that introduce their functions and products.

“computers”应为单数“computer”，因为通常指个人电脑；“scroll”后应加介词“through”。

× For example, when I scroll my social media like Tiktok or Facebook, they always have a lot of advertisements which associated with my interests.

✓ For example, when I scroll through my social media like TikTok or Facebook, they always have a lot of advertisements which are associated with my interests.

“scroll”后应加介词“through”；“which associated”缺少动词，应为“which are associated”；“TikTok”拼写错误。