Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且增加细节使内容更丰富。

예시: One advertisement that impressed me as a child showed a volunteer helping an elderly person cross the road. The elderly looked very tired, and the volunteer kindly assisted her, which made me feel touched.

제안: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and other public transport. They usually display commercials on screens or posters inside the vehicles.

제안: 回答中断断续续且重复，缺乏连贯性。建议练习流利表达，避免重复，并用完整句子表达观点。

예시: No, I don't like advertisements because they often interrupt my TV shows or videos, which makes me feel annoyed.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用多样词汇，避免重复，并用连贯句子表达喜好。

예시: I like advertisements about volunteers and delicious Thai food because they make me feel relaxed and interested.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone when I watch videos. Sometimes, these ads disturb me.

× The most impressive advertisement is that a volunteer help a old old people across the road.

✓ The most impressive advertisement is that a volunteer helps an old person across the road.

这里的错误是单复数使用不当。'a volunteer help'中，主语是单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为'helps'。'a old old people'中，'people'是复数，前面不能用不定冠词'a'，且应使用单数形式'person'。建议改为'an old person'。

× The old people look very tired and volunteer help her and help her.

✓ The old person looks very tired and the volunteer helps her.

这里的错误是单复数不一致。'The old people'应改为单数'the old person'，因为前文已改为单数。动词'look'应改为'looks'以符合单数主语。'volunteer help'应改为'volunteer helps'，动词需加-s。重复的'help her'应去掉。

× Absolutely, I often see a lot of advertise advertisement on chains on chance.

✓ Absolutely, I often see a lot of advertisements on trains or on the chance.

'advertise advertisement'重复且错误，应为'advertisements'。'chains on chance'应为'trains or on the chance'，这里可能是发音或拼写错误，正确表达应为'trains or other transport'。

× The advertisement often play in the war play in the chess world and the people can watch it.

✓ The advertisements often play during the World Cup and people can watch them.

'play in the war play in the chess world'表达混乱，应为'during the World Cup'或类似表达。'advertisement'应为复数'advertisements'，动词应为'play'的第三人称复数形式'play'。'the people'前的定冠词可省略。

× No, I don't like the advertisement because I think the advertisement may, uh, made me, made me feel annoyed because when I watch the TV show or watch the watching the video, uh, the I will, uh, the advertisement often.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements because I think they may make me feel annoyed when I watch TV shows or videos, as advertisements often appear.

'may made me'错误，情态动词'may'后应接动词原形'make'。'the advertisement'应改为复数'advertisements'以符合上下文。句子结构混乱，需简化并调整时态。

× I like the advertisement which about volunteer volunteer and the delicious foods, delicious foods, Thai uh, delicious foods types.

✓ I like advertisements about volunteering and delicious Thai foods.

'the advertisement which about volunteer volunteer'结构错误，应为'advertisements about volunteering'。'delicious foods, delicious foods, Thai uh, delicious foods types'重复且表达不清，简化为'delicious Thai foods'。

× When I watch it it, it can make me feel relaxed.

✓ When I watch them, they can make me feel relaxed.

'it it, it'重复且不明确，指代复数'advertisements'，应使用复数代词'them'和'they'。

× Absolutely, I often see the advertisement on my phone when I rolling the videos.

✓ Absolutely, I often see advertisements on my phone when I am rolling the videos.

'the advertisement'应为复数'advertisements'。'when I rolling'缺少助动词，应为'when I am rolling'。

× The advertisement always always display on it.

✓ Advertisements are always displayed on it.

'display on it'用法不当，广告通常被动展示，应使用被动语态'displayed on it'。

× If you will disturb my.

✓ They will disturb me.

句子结构错误，缺少主语和谓语，且'If you will disturb my'不完整。应改为完整句子'They will disturb me.'