Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然流畅，存在重复和语法错误。建议简化表达，避免使用填充词，直接回答问题并补充具体细节。

예시: I don't remember any specific advertisement from my childhood because I usually skipped them while watching TV or using apps. If I couldn't skip, I would do something else to avoid watching.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误。建议直接回答问题，并用连词连接具体细节，表达更连贯。

예시: No, I don't see many advertisements on trains because I usually focus on playing games or watching videos on my phone during the ride.

제안: 回答较为直接，但表达中有语法错误和不自然的用词。建议使用更准确的语法和丰富词汇，表达观点更清晰。

예시: No, I don't like advertisements because they waste my time, especially when I have to watch them before using websites like translation services, which can be very annoying.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，表达更自然。

예시: I usually don't like advertisements because they waste my time. However, I sometimes get attracted by food ads because I enjoy trying new dishes, even though I know junk food can be unhealthy.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更准确连贯。

예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone or computer because they appear everywhere. Especially on free apps or websites, sometimes I can skip the ads, but they still take up a lot of my time.

× because I will choose skip them

✓ because I would choose to skip them

这里使用的是过去的情境，应该用情态动词的过去式would表示假设或过去习惯，而不是将来时的will。

× when I was watching TV or screwing through apps

✓ when I was watching TV or scrolling through apps

动词'screw'用错了，正确的表达是'scroll through apps'，表示浏览应用。

× if I can't skip this advertisement, I will choose to do other

✓ if I can't skip this advertisement, I would choose to do other things

这里是虚拟条件句，应该用would表示假设，同时'do other'不完整，需补充'do other things'。

× in most of time I prefer to play me my phones

✓ most of the time I prefer to play on my phone

'most of time'缺少定冠词'the'，'play me my phones'表达错误，正确是'play on my phone'。

× I prefer to play me my phones

✓ I prefer to play on my phone

'play me my phones'中'play me'用法错误，应该是'play on my phone'，表示在手机上玩。

× I prefer to let me in vendor instead of watching advertisements

✓ I prefer to let myself be entertained instead of watching advertisements

'let me in vendor'表达不清，应该用'reflect自己'的正确用法'let myself be entertained'。

× I don't like it

✓ I don't like them

前文提到的是'advertisements'复数，代词应使用复数'them'。

× why need to use the translate websites?

✓ why do I need to use translation websites?

缺少主语和助动词，且'translate websites'应为'translation websites'。

× different kind of new food

✓ different kinds of new food

'kind'应使用复数形式'kinds'，且后接复数名词。

× you can skip the forced advertisement

✓ you can skip the forced advertisements

这里指的是多次出现的广告，应该用复数形式。

× It's really totally with time

✓ It really wastes time

原句表达不清，应该用'wastes time'表示浪费时间。