Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, there was an advertisement for a new milk brand that impressed me as a child. It became very popular because of its catchy tune and memorable words. Even now, I can recall the song clearly, which shows how effective it was.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words like 'uh' and some grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid fillers and use correct plural forms. Use linking words like 'however' appropriately to improve coherence.

예시: No, I don't see much advertising on trains or other transport these days because most companies prefer online platforms like social media. However, some businesses still advertise on buses depending on their target audience.

제안: Your answer expresses your opinion clearly but can be improved by avoiding fillers and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your feelings.

예시: No, I don't like advertisements because they interrupt videos or TV shows, breaking the flow. Moreover, repeated ads can become annoying and monotonous.

제안: Good answer with clear preferences and examples. To improve, ensure subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'advertisements that are'), and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, briefly explain why you like the example given.

예시: I like advertisements that are short, catchy, and provide clear information. I dislike long or confusing ads with hidden agendas. For example, the Rare Beauty perfume campaign impressed me because it was innovative and honest.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some awkward phrasing like 'somewhere the other'. Try to use clearer expressions and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer, even with paid subscriptions. Although some ads relate to my interests, I find them annoying and repetitive.

× When I was a child I was an advertisement about a new brand of milk and it had gained so much popularity and appreciation that to this day I remember the tuning and each and every word of the advertisement.

✓ When I was a child there was an advertisement about a new brand of milk and it had gained so much popularity and appreciation that to this day I remember the tune and each and every word of the advertisement.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I was an advertisement' instead of 'there was an advertisement', which is a 'There be issue' (ID 3). Also, 'tuning' is incorrect; the correct word is 'tune'. The correction fixes the existential construction and the noun usage.

× When I was a child I was an advertisement about a new brand of milk and it had gained so much popularity and appreciation that to this day I remember the tuning and each and every word of the advertisement.

✓ When I was a child there was an advertisement about a new brand of milk and it had gained so much popularity and appreciation that to this day I remember the tune and each and every word of the advertisement.

The phrase 'I was an advertisement' is incorrect because it uses the subject 'I' instead of the existential 'there' to indicate the existence of an advertisement. The correct form is 'there was an advertisement'.

× No, I don't see a lot of advertising on trains or other transports these days.

✓ No, I don't see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport these days.

The word 'transport' is generally uncountable when referring to modes of transportation collectively. Using 'transports' is incorrect pluralization. The correction removes the plural form to use the uncountable noun correctly.

× I feel everyone prefer to uh, advertise online on social media or Internet websites.

✓ I feel everyone prefers to uh, advertise online on social media or Internet websites.

The subject 'everyone' is singular and requires the verb in third person singular form 'prefers'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue (ID 27) related to singular and plural usage.

× However, uh, there are quite a few companies that prefer to advertise on bus.

✓ However, uh, there are quite a few companies that prefer to advertise on buses.

The phrase 'on bus' is incorrect because 'bus' should be pluralized to 'buses' when referring to advertising on multiple buses or the general concept. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I like advertising that are short, catchy, and just give you the exact information that you need to know.

✓ I like advertising that is short, catchy, and just gives you the exact information that you need to know.

The word 'advertising' is singular (uncountable) and should be paired with singular verbs 'is' and 'gives'. Using 'are' and 'give' is incorrect subject-verb agreement related to singular and plural issue.