Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了主要内容，但句子结构不完整，且结尾不清晰。建议注意句子完整性，避免句子中断，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, there was a famous advertisement about wild animal protection that left a strong impression on me when I was a child. It featured Yao Ming and showed powerful scenes of animals being hunted, but without graphic violence, which made it both emotional and impactful.

제안: 回答较简短，缺少连接词和具体细节。建议增加更多细节描述，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on trains and other transport. For example, once when I was traveling to another city, I noticed a familiar advertisement from my hometown, which impressed me a lot because it reminded me of home.

제안: 表达中有语法错误和重复词汇，且用词不够准确。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，并用更合适的词汇表达观点。

예시: To be honest, I don't like advertisements, especially pop-up ads on websites, because they can be very annoying and interrupt my browsing experience.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，且表达含糊。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并避免口语化的犹豫词。

예시: I prefer advertisements that are creative and tell a meaningful story, such as public service announcements on TV, because they can inspire people effectively.

제안: 回答较好，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

예시: Yes, of course. I often see advertisements on my phone and computer, usually as pop-ups or banners on websites and apps, which can sometimes be quite distracting when I'm trying to focus.

× Yes, there is a very famous advertisement about wild animal protection that left strong impression on me when I was a child.

✓ Yes, there is a very famous advertisement about wild animal protection that left a strong impression on me when I was a child.

The phrase 'left strong impression' is missing the article 'a' before 'strong impression'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article or determiner. Here, 'impression' is singular and countable, so 'a' is needed.

× It sought Yao Ming and showed powerful scenes of animals being hunted but without graphic violence, which made it both emotional and.

✓ It sought Yao Ming and showed powerful scenes of animals being hunted but without graphic violence, which made it both emotional and impactful.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the comparison or list, causing a sentence structure error. Adding 'impactful' completes the phrase 'both emotional and impactful', making the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× I prefer advertisements that is creative and tells a story just like the public welfare as on TV.

✓ I prefer advertisements that are creative and tell a story just like the public welfare as on TV.

The subject 'advertisements' is plural, so the verb should be plural as well. 'Is' and 'tells' are singular forms; they should be changed to 'are' and 'tell' to agree with the plural subject.