Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
수험생
So yeah, of course, if I'm not mistaken, this advertisement was explained, the condom that was very good for use. And even for 16 years people, it was still a good news and I used to like it, but nowadays it's not so interesting for me. So yeah.
시험관
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
수험생
So yeah, of course nowadays in our country, it's a common thing, especially when I go to the subway station, I always see lots of different, lots of different advertisements because the vast majority of companies are now going to.
시험관
Do you like advertisements?
수험생
So to be honest, I would say not really, because nowadays it's very common in our country and companies find, find that, uh, advertising in public transport is a very good way to improvement of their product. But I really dislike it because it's a little bit embarrassing for me.
시험관
What kind of advertising do you like?
수험생
So nowadays, uh, in our country there are lots of advertisements, but the one that I like the most is promoting football clubs because I find football interesting and for me it's interesting to follow the advertisement about the football club.
시험관
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
수험생
So yeah, of course nowadays it's common and when you try to see some kind of film in free websites, there are advertisements that can bump up in it and it would be a little bit embarrassing for everybody because it would.
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총점
Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
점수: 45.0제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid ambiguous phrases, and provide specific details. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.
예시: Yes, I remember an advertisement about a popular chocolate brand that I really liked as a child. It was colourful and featured a catchy jingle, which made it memorable. I used to ask my parents to buy that chocolate because of the ad.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer is relevant but somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific examples to enrich your response.
예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and at subway stations. For example, there are posters promoting new movies and local events, which catch my attention during my commute.
Do you like advertisements?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer expresses your opinion but lacks fluency and clear reasoning. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, explain your reasons using linking words, and avoid hesitation sounds.
예시: To be honest, I don't like advertisements very much because they are everywhere, especially on public transport. Moreover, some ads can be quite intrusive, which makes me feel uncomfortable.
What kind of advertising do you like?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent and engaging.
예시: I particularly enjoy advertisements that promote football clubs because I am a big fan of the sport. These ads often feature exciting highlights and upcoming matches, which keep me informed and interested.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
점수: 50.0제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide specific details. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and avoid ambiguity.
예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone or computer, especially when watching videos on free websites. Sometimes, these ads can be quite annoying because they interrupt the content unexpectedly.
문법
× this advertisement was explained, the condom that was very good for use.
✓ this advertisement explained that the condom was very good for use.
The phrase 'was explained' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is the active voice 'explained' to indicate the advertisement conveyed the message. Using 'was explained' (passive) is incorrect in this context.
× And even for 16 years people, it was still a good news
✓ And even for 16-year-olds, it was still good news
'16 years people' is incorrect; the correct term is '16-year-olds' to refer to people aged 16. Also, 'news' is uncountable and does not take 'a' before it.
× companies find, find that, uh, advertising in public transport is a very good way to improvement of their product.
✓ companies find that advertising on public transport is a very good way to improve their product.
The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to advertising on public transport. Also, 'way to improvement' is incorrect; it should be 'way to improve'.
× I always see lots of different, lots of different advertisements because the vast majority of companies are now going to.
✓ I always see lots of different advertisements because the vast majority of companies are now going there.
The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Assuming the intended meaning is that companies are now going there (to advertise), 'going to' needs an object. Adding 'there' completes the sentence.
× there are advertisements that can bump up in it
✓ there are advertisements that can pop up in it
The phrase 'bump up' is incorrect in this context; the correct phrasal verb is 'pop up' to describe advertisements appearing suddenly.
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