Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 좀 더 구체적으로 광고 내용을 기억하지 못하더라도 인상 깊었던 점을 설명하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I can't recall the exact advertisement, but I remember a jelly commercial that had a catchy song which stayed in my mind for a long time.

제안: 답변이 다소 모호하고 반복적인 표현이 있습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하는 문장을 연습하세요.

예시: I don't really notice advertisements on trains because I usually focus on my smartphone during the ride.

제안: 의사 전달이 명확하지 않고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 자신의 의견을 분명히 표현하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I usually find advertisements annoying, but sometimes they are helpful when I'm interested in buying a product.

제안: 답변이 간결하지만 더 구체적인 설명과 연결어 사용이 필요합니다. 어떤 점에서 재미있는 광고를 좋아하는지 구체적으로 말하는 연습을 하세요.

예시: Although I don't like most advertisements, I enjoy funny ones because they make me laugh and catch my attention.

제안: 답변이 자연스럽고 직접적이지만, 문장 연결과 어휘 사용을 좀 더 다양하게 하면 좋겠습니다. 불편함을 표현할 때 더 구체적인 이유를 덧붙여 보세요.

예시: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on my phone, especially when I play mobile games. They appear after every round, which can be quite frustrating.

× I remember that a Jelly advertisements with some songs.

✓ I remember that a jelly advertisement with some songs.

'Advertisements' is plural but 'a' indicates singular. The noun should be singular to match the article 'a'. Also, 'Jelly' should not be capitalized unless it is a brand name, but here it seems to be a common noun.

× when I get in some train or transport I just look only my smartphone

✓ when I get on some train or transport I just look at my smartphone

The correct preposition for entering a train or transport is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'look only my smartphone' is incorrect; it should be 'look at my smartphone' to indicate focusing on it.

× it's a little bit annoying me

✓ it annoys me a little bit

The phrase 'annoying me' is incorrect here. The verb 'annoy' should be used in active form 'it annoys me' to express the feeling properly.

× if I have some mind to buy something, then it's not possible, it's not necessary.

✓ if I have some intention to buy something, then it's not necessary.

'Some mind' is not a correct expression. The correct phrase is 'some intention' or 'the intention'. Also, 'it's not possible' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× I don't like the most advertisements

✓ I don't like most advertisements

The phrase 'the most advertisements' is incorrect. 'Most advertisements' without 'the' is the correct plural form to express general dislike.

× When I play some mobile game on my smartphone, then one play and one advertisement.

✓ When I play some mobile game on my smartphone, then one play is followed by one advertisement.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper verb usage. Adding 'is followed by' clarifies the relationship between play and advertisement.