Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然。建议使用过去时态描述过去的事情，并且丰富细节，使回答更具体。

예시: Yes, I remember a toothpaste commercial from my childhood that featured many children happily brushing their teeth. It made a strong impression on me because it showed how fun and important dental care can be.

제안: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免语法错误，并且用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, nowadays we often see many advertisements on public transportation, especially on trains. For example, ads are placed on the seats and walls inside the train, which makes them very noticeable.

제안: 回答中时态混乱，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确时态，并且用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I like advertisements because I majored in advertising when I was a freshman. I enjoy this field since it allows me to create attractive videos and images.

제안: 表达不完整且含糊，缺少连贯性。建议明确表达观点，使用连词连接句子，并具体说明喜欢的广告类型。

예시: I like advertisements that are integrated into TV series because they catch my attention without interrupting the story. Such ads feel natural and relevant.

제안: 句子结构不完整，表达不流畅。建议使用完整句子，避免重复和语气词，清晰表达原因。

예시: Yes, I often see various advertisements on my phone and computer because technological development has increased our opportunities to access the Internet.

× Yeah, I remembered a commercial that is about a toothpaste and there are many children on the screen.

✓ Yeah, I remember a commercial that is about a toothpaste and there are many children on the screen.

这里使用了过去时态“remembered”，但句子描述的是对过去的记忆，应该用一般现在时“remember”表示现在仍然记得。

× Maybe we can saw the advertisements in our chair or just on the wall of the train is.

✓ Maybe we can see the advertisements on our chair or just on the wall of the train.

“saw”是过去式，应该用现在时“see”；“in our chair”应改为“on our chair”表示广告贴在椅子上；句尾多余的“is”应删除。

× Yeah, I do like advertisements because my major is advertising when I was a freshman.

✓ Yeah, I do like advertisements because my major was advertising when I was a freshman.

“my major is advertising when I was a freshman”时态不一致，描述过去的情况应使用过去时“was”。

× I like a type of advertisement that just added to a TV series when we, uh, pay attention to the story in the TV series.

✓ I like a type of advertisement that is just added to a TV series when we, uh, pay attention to the story in the TV series.

缺少被动语态助动词“is”，应为“is just added”，表示广告被添加到电视剧中。

× Just a suitable advertisements just here so.

✓ Just a suitable advertisement here.

“advertisements”应为单数“advertisement”与“a”搭配；“just here so”表达不清，简化为“here”更合适。

× Yeah, I often see different kinds of advertisements in my phone or in my computer because with development of the technology and we have more, uh, chances to, uh, serve on the Internet, so.

✓ Yeah, I often see different kinds of advertisements on my phone or on my computer because with the development of technology, we have more chances to surf on the Internet.

“in my phone/computer”应改为“on my phone/computer”；“serve on the Internet”应为“surf on the Internet”；缺少冠词“the”在“development of technology”前。