Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I still remember a milk commercial called Vietnam Free Kogi. It showed free cheerful girl singing it about health and happiness and I found it really cute and catchy when I was a child. Even now that chingo sometimes pops into my head.
시험관
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
수험생
Yes, definitely. In big cities like Ho Chi Minh City, I often see colorful posters on buses and at metro stations. They usually promote mobile apps, food delivery or English centers.
시험관
Do you like advertisements?
수험생
Not really, but I can deny that some are quite creative. If the art tells a good story or has meaningful content, I actually enjoy watching it instead of skipping it.
시험관
What kind of advertising do you like?
수험생
I like emotional or inspiring ads, especially those about family or education. They feel more relatable and leave a strong message rather than just trying to sell something.
시험관
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
수험생
Yes, all the time when I scroll through TikTok or YouTube there are ads everywhere. Some are annoying but sometimes I find it interesting products that I actually want to do want to try.
평가
총점
Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ, bạn nên sửa lỗi từ 'chingo' và mô tả rõ hơn về quảng cáo.
예시: Yes, I remember a milk commercial called 'Vietnam Free Kogi' from my childhood. It featured a cheerful girl singing about health and happiness, which I found very cute and catchy. Even now, the jingle sometimes pops into my head, reminding me of those happy times.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
점수: 80.0제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng chi tiết cụ thể hơn về loại quảng cáo bạn thấy.
예시: Yes, definitely. In big cities like Ho Chi Minh City, I often see colorful posters on buses and at metro stations. These advertisements usually promote mobile apps, food delivery services, or English learning centers, which are very popular among young people.
Do you like advertisements?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ 'deny' sai ngữ cảnh và làm câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
예시: Not really, but I can't deny that some advertisements are quite creative. If an ad tells a good story or has meaningful content, I actually enjoy watching it instead of skipping it.
What kind of advertising do you like?
점수: 85.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn tốt nhưng có thể thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I like emotional or inspiring advertisements, especially those about family or education. For example, ads that show parents supporting their children’s learning feel more relatable and leave a strong message, rather than just trying to sell a product.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
점수: 60.0제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn.
예시: Yes, I see advertisements all the time when I scroll through TikTok or YouTube. Although some ads are annoying, sometimes I find interesting products that I actually want to try.
문법
× It showed free cheerful girl singing it about health and happiness and I found it really cute and catchy when I was a child.
✓ It showed a free cheerful girl singing about health and happiness and I found it really cute and catchy when I was a child.
The phrase 'singing it about health and happiness' is incorrect because the verb 'singing' should be followed directly by the object or topic without the pronoun 'it'. The correct form is 'singing about health and happiness'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'free cheerful girl' to specify a singular noun.
× Even now that chingo sometimes pops into my head.
✓ Even now that jingle sometimes pops into my head.
The word 'chingo' seems to be a typo or incorrect word choice. The correct word is likely 'jingle', which refers to a catchy tune or phrase in an advertisement. Using the correct noun clarifies the meaning.
× Some are annoying but sometimes I find it interesting products that I actually want to do want to try.
✓ Some are annoying but sometimes I find interesting products that I actually want to try.
The phrase 'I find it interesting products' is incorrect because 'find' should be followed directly by the object without 'it'. Also, 'do want to want to try' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'I find interesting products that I actually want to try'.
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