Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，且句子结构较简单。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

예시: Yes, I vividly remember a TV commercial about Barbie dolls. The colorful clothes and beautiful houses really caught my attention when I was a child.

제안: 回答内容较为简单，表达略显重复。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on various forms of transport, such as metros, buses, and taxis, because companies use these spaces to promote their products and increase profits.

제안: 表达中有语法错误，且句子结构不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: Not really. I find advertisements quite annoying, especially when I'm scrolling through my phone, as they often interrupt my experience.

제안: 句子结构简单，语法和用词有误。建议丰富句子结构，使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I enjoy advertisements about makeup because I like trying different products, and these ads often provide useful recommendations.

제안: 回答较简短，表达略显重复。建议增加细节并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Definitely. Especially when I'm using social media or playing video games, advertisements frequently appear, which can be quite frustrating.

× Definitely a TV commercial showed about Barbie.

✓ Definitely a TV commercial showed Barbie.

这里的动词'showed'后面不需要介词'about'，直接加宾语Barbie即可。'showed about'是不正确的搭配。

× The Barbie's clothes and houses are beautiful and colourful, which is very eye catchy when I was young.

✓ Barbie's clothes and houses are beautiful and colourful, which were very eye-catching when I was young.

'The Barbie's'中不需要定冠词'the'，直接用'Barbie's'。'eye catchy'应为复合形容词'eye-catching'。此外，时态应与'when I was young'一致，使用过去时'were'。

× Yes, I have seen a bunch of advertisements whether on metro system, buses, taxis, any kind of transportation.

✓ Yes, I have seen a bunch of advertisements on the metro system, buses, taxis, and any kind of transportation.

'whether'用法错误，应去掉。'on metro system'前应加定冠词'the'。列举多个项时，最后两项之间应加连词'and'。

× People like to put advertisement on it in order to profit.

✓ People like to put advertisements on them in order to make a profit.

'advertisement'应为复数'advertisements'，因为指多个广告。'on it'指代不明确，应改为'them'指代前面的交通工具。'profit'前应加动词短语'make a'。

× Not really, I think they're quite annoying, especially sometimes you just want to scroll through your phone.

✓ Not really, I think they're quite annoying, especially when you just want to scroll through your phone.

'especially sometimes'搭配不当，应改为'especially when'引导时间状语从句，更符合语法和表达习惯。

× They keep showing up to make you feel interrupted.

✓ They keep showing up and make you feel interrupted.

'to make you feel interrupted'结构不自然，改为'and make you feel interrupted'更符合表达习惯。

× I like the advertisement about makeup because I like to try different kind of products.

✓ I like advertisements about makeup because I like to try different kinds of products.

'advertisement'应为复数'advertisements'，'different kind of products'应为'different kinds of products'，表示多种类的产品。

× Those advertisements always can get me some good recommendations.

✓ Those advertisements can always give me some good recommendations.

情态动词'can'后不应插入副词'always'，应将副词放在情态动词后面。'get me recommendations'表达不自然，改为'give me recommendations'更合适。

× Especially when I'm using social media or playing the video game, they keep showing up to make me feel frustrated.

✓ Especially when I'm using social media or playing video games, they keep showing up and make me feel frustrated.

'the video game'应改为复数形式'video games'，因为泛指电子游戏。'to make me feel frustrated'改为'and make me feel frustrated'更自然。