Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，且未直接回答问题。建议直接回答是否记得印象深刻的广告，并简要说明原因。

예시: Yes, I remember a cartoon advertisement about a toy that I really liked because it was colorful and fun.

제안: 回答不够流畅，有语法错误，且未直接回答广告数量的问题。建议直接回答是否看到很多广告，并补充细节。

예시: I don't see many advertisements on public transport because I rarely use it, and when I do, I usually focus on my phone or a book.

제안: 回答表达不完整且有重复，语法错误较多。建议简洁表达观点，并给出具体原因。

예시: I don't like advertisements because they interrupt my favorite videos and often repeat the same content, which is annoying.

제안: 回答不够连贯，有语法错误，且表达不完整。建议使用连词连接句子，清晰表达喜欢的广告类型及原因。

예시: I like fun advertisements because they are easy to remember, and I often share them with my friends online.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并说明原因。

예시: No, I don't often see advertisements on my phone or computer because I use ad blockers, and I prefer to enjoy products without interruptions.

× I don't really remember any kids from when I was a kid.

✓ I don't really remember any advertisements from when I was a kid.

这里的 'kids' 用法不当，题目问的是广告（advertisement），而不是孩子（kids），应使用复数形式的 'advertisements' 来表示多个广告。

× I don't like advertisement because they interrupt my favorite videos and my shows also.

✓ I don't like advertisements because they interrupt my favorite videos and my shows also.

'advertisement' 应使用复数形式 'advertisements'，因为后面用的是复数代词 'they'，表示多个广告。

× They they repeat same thing and, uh, aren't very.

✓ They repeat the same thing and, uh, aren't very good.

缺少冠词 'the'，'same thing' 前应加 'the'，且句子不完整，补充 'good' 使句子完整。

× I like fun advertisement because they are easy to remember that Sam.

✓ I like fun advertisements because they are easy to remember.

'advertisement' 应使用复数形式 'advertisements'，且句子中 'that Sam' 无意义，应删除。

× Also I usually. Share with my friend online.

✓ Also, I usually share with my friends online.

'friend' 应使用复数形式 'friends'，表示多个朋友。

× No, I don't often see advertisement on my phone or computer because I think about it, they don't have a creative.

✓ No, I don't often see advertisements on my phone or computer because I think they aren't creative.

'advertisement' 应使用复数形式 'advertisements'，且句子中 'have a creative' 结构错误，应改为 'aren't creative'。

× Uh, if I you, if I use, I usually focus it on my phone or book.

✓ Uh, if I use it, I usually focus on my phone or book.

'focus it on' 中多余的 'it' 应删除，正确用法是 'focus on' 某物。

× They they repeat same thing and, uh, aren't very.

✓ They repeat the same thing and, uh, aren't very interesting.

句子不完整，缺少形容词，补充 'interesting' 使句子完整且表达清晰。

× Also I usually. Share with my friend online.

✓ Also, I usually share with my friends online.

句子断开不完整，应合并为一句完整句子，并且 'friend' 应为复数形式。

× No, I don't often see advertisement on my phone or computer because I think about it, they don't have a creative.

✓ No, I don't often see advertisements on my phone or computer because I think they aren't creative.

句子结构混乱，'think about it' 多余且影响理解，应删除，且 'have a creative' 结构错误，应改为 'aren't creative'。