Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời câu trả lời khá dài dòng và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, there wasn't any advertisement that left a strong impression on me as a child because I usually ignored them. Most of the time, I just watched ads to relax or pass the time while switching between videos.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: No, I don't see many advertisements on trains or other transport. Usually, people are busy talking or using their smartphones to scroll social media or work, so ads are not very noticeable.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm rõ quan điểm của bạn.

예시: I don't really like advertisements because they can be boring and interrupt movies. However, I admit that some ads are useful since they introduce good products and can be quite expressive.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về loại quảng cáo bạn thích.

예시: Although I generally don't like advertisements, I enjoy food ads because they introduce new dishes and flavors that I might want to try.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer, especially when I watch videos or browse websites. Most ads are about shopping, but sometimes they interrupt movies, which makes me feel disappointed.

× Well, I think no, there aren't any advertisement that made me feel expression when I was a child.

✓ Well, I think no, there aren't any advertisements that made me feel expression when I was a child.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' because it refers to multiple items. In English, countable nouns need to be plural when referring to more than one.

× I don't usually pay much attention about them.

✓ I don't usually pay much attention to them.

The correct preposition to use with 'pay attention' is 'to', not 'about'. This is a fixed expression in English.

× Most of the time. I usually just watched ads to relax or pass time because switching to other videos, yeah.

✓ Most of the time, I usually just watch ads to relax or pass time because I switch to other videos, yeah.

The sentence was fragmented and had tense inconsistency. 'Most of the time.' is a fragment and should be connected. 'Watched' should be 'watch' to match present habitual action. 'Switching' should be 'I switch' to form a complete clause.

× No I don't see any advertisement on trains or other transport that I have go gone to because usually in trains people just talking to others peoples and or scrolling their social media use their smartphone to work or other.

✓ No, I don't see any advertisements on trains or other transport that I have gone to because usually on trains people just talk to other people or scroll their social media using their smartphones to work or other things.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'any'. 'Go gone' is incorrect; 'have gone' is correct. 'Peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is plural already. 'Talking' should be 'talk' to match present tense. 'Use' should be 'using' to indicate ongoing action. 'Smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones' to match 'people'.

× Well, I would like to say no, I don't like advertisement sometimes.

✓ Well, I would like to say no, I don't like advertisements sometimes.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' because it refers to advertisements in general.

× However, sometimes advertisement brings many beneficials to people's.

✓ However, sometimes advertisements bring many benefits to people.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'. 'Beneficials' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'benefits'. 'People's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be 'people'.

× But advertisements sometimes bring me feel very bored because it don't connect me to the movies.

✓ But advertisements sometimes make me feel very bored because they don't connect me to the movies.

'Bring me feel' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make me feel'. 'It' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'advertisements'. 'Don't' is correct with plural subject.

× Well, as I said before, I don't like any advertising, but if that advertising about about food, I I think I would love to see them a little because I would love to eat a new food or tasty a new ingredients or flavor.

✓ Well, as I said before, I don't like any advertising, but if that advertising is about food, I think I would love to see it a little because I would love to eat new food or taste new ingredients or flavors.

'Advertising' is uncountable, so 'that advertising about about food' needs 'is' to form a correct clause. 'Them' should be 'it' to refer to singular 'advertising'. 'Tasty' is an adjective; the verb should be 'taste'. 'A new ingredients' is incorrect; 'ingredients' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Flavor' should be plural 'flavors' to match 'ingredients'.

× Yes, I usually see advertisement when I using my phone on my computer because I watch many videos or sometimes I search some website to study and that advertisement about shopping they would like to appeared and introduce me their products.

✓ Yes, I usually see advertisements when I use my phone or computer because I watch many videos or sometimes I search some websites to study and those advertisements about shopping would like to appear and introduce their products to me.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'. 'I using' is incorrect; should be 'I use'. 'On my computer' should be 'or computer' to indicate either device. 'Some website' should be 'some websites'. 'That advertisement' should be 'those advertisements' to agree with plural. 'Would like to appeared' should be 'would like to appear'. 'Introduce me their products' should be 'introduce their products to me'.

× But I don't like sometimes when I watch the movie that advertisement make me feel disappointed.

✓ But sometimes I don't like it when I watch a movie because that advertisement makes me feel disappointed.

The sentence structure was awkward. 'Don't like sometimes' should be 'sometimes I don't like it'. 'The movie' should be 'a movie' as it is general. 'That advertisement make' should be 'that advertisement makes' to agree with singular subject. Added 'because' for clarity.