Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复，且内容不完整。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, a public advertisement featuring my favorite cartoon character impressed me when I was a child because I loved cartoons very much.

제안: 回答中有较多语法错误和重复，句子不完整。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并补充具体原因。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and metros because these places have many commuters, making them ideal spots for advertising.

제안: 回答表达不够准确，有语法错误。建议简洁表达观点，使用正确时态，并具体说明喜欢的原因。

예시: Yes, I like advertisements because some are funny and interesting, and public service ads teach me how to protect the environment.

제안: 回答重复且语法错误较多，内容不够清晰。建议简洁表达喜好，避免重复，并具体说明喜欢的广告类型和原因。

예시: I prefer public advertisements because they are interesting and often feature animals like pandas, which raise awareness about environmental protection.

제안: 回答中存在时态错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确时态，避免重复，并清晰表达感受。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on my phone, especially pop-ups during videos, which I find very annoying and distracting.

× The advertisement is is created by my favorite cartoon character.

✓ The advertisement is created by my favorite cartoon character.

句子中出现了重复的动词“is”，应删除多余的“is”以保证句子结构正确。

× I'm crazy about cartoon when I was a little kid so the advertisement in.

✓ I was crazy about cartoons when I was a little kid, so the advertisement impressed me.

“crazy about”后应接复数名词“cartoons”，且句子末尾不完整，应补充完整表达。

× Yes, I see many advertisements on the trains on other transports like the metro because there are a lot of commuters need to need to take the train or the metro on when they go into when they go to their work.

✓ Yes, I see many advertisements on trains and other transport like the metro because there are a lot of commuters who need to take the train or the metro when they go to work.

“trains”前不需要冠词“the”，且“commuters need to need to”重复，应删除多余部分。

× So it it was a nice place for advertisements to show because it's.

✓ So it is a nice place for advertisements to be shown because many people see them there.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× Also on some advertisements like the public advertisement can taught me a lot about advocate us to protect the earth.

✓ Also, some advertisements like public service advertisements can teach me a lot and advocate for us to protect the earth.

“can taught”时态错误，应为“can teach”；“advocate us”用法错误，应为“advocate for us”。

× Well, in my opinion, I prefer on the public advertisements because on the public advertisements is always interesting and have some white animals like pandas in the white in the public advertisements and the public public advertisements can talk on people a lot about protecting.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I prefer public advertisements because they are always interesting and have some white animals like pandas. Public advertisements can tell people a lot about protecting the environment.

“prefer on”用法错误，应为“prefer”；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整表达。

× I often see a lot of advertisements when I was on my phone because when I watched some videos on the phone, there are also some pop up advertisements, which makes me feel very annoyed because I think it was very it was very distracting me and I was, I was, I was.

✓ I often see a lot of advertisements when I am on my phone because when I watch some videos on the phone, there are also some pop-up advertisements, which make me feel very annoyed because I think they are very distracting.

时态不一致，“see”应与“am”搭配，且“makes”应改为“make”与复数主语一致；句子末尾重复且不完整，应删除。