Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达广告内容和印象，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I remember a very popular advertisement in China when I was a child. It was for a snack that was extremely sour. The ad showed people trying the snack and reacting to its strong taste, which made it very memorable for me.

제안: 回答较为简单，存在重复和语法问题。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体描述广告内容或感受。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and subways in China. For example, when I travel with my friends, I notice colorful posters promoting movies or products, which I find quite interesting.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法错误影响理解。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词组织内容。

예시: I like advertisements depending on the situation and my mood. For instance, if I am happy, I enjoy watching ads, but if I am upset, I tend to dislike them.

제안: 句子结构不完整，语法错误较多。建议使用简单句表达观点，并具体说明喜欢创意广告的原因。

예시: I like creative advertisements because they give me an artistic impression of the product and provide useful and genuine feelings.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，明确描述广告出现的情况。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on my phone and computer. For example, when I search on websites like Google, ads frequently pop up on the screen.

× Yes, I remembered there is one advertisement in China was very popular at that time.

✓ Yes, I remember there was one advertisement in China that was very popular at that time.

这里的时间是过去，所以动词应该用过去时。'remembered' 应该用现在时 'remember'，因为说话时仍然记得；'is' 应该用过去时 'was'，因为广告在过去很流行。

× It was about an A snack especially for it because it very sour.

✓ It was about a snack that was especially sour.

句子结构混乱，'an A snack' 应为 'a snack'，'especially for it' 不合适，应该用定语从句 'that was especially sour' 来修饰 'snack'。

× It was very sour and very special.

✓ It was very sour and very special.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× It If you're OK, you can.

✓ （此句不完整，建议删除或补充完整）

句子不完整，缺少主语和谓语，无法理解其含义，建议删除或补充完整。

× Every time I went out with friends to have some amusement, you know, take the bus or take the subway, I would.

✓ Every time I went out with friends to have some amusement, you know, took the bus or took the subway, I would see a lot of advertisements on it.

这里描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时 'took'，并补充完整句子使其通顺。

× I would. I would see a lot of advertisements on it.

✓ I would see a lot of advertisements on it.

句子中断，重复 'I would'，应合并为一句完整句子。

× I think it depends on in what situation I see the advertisement and depends on my mood at that time.

✓ I think it depends on the situation in which I see the advertisement and on my mood at that time.

'depends on in what situation' 介词使用错误，应改为 'depends on the situation in which'。

× If I was very disappointed or upset when I say the advertisement, I definitely will hate it, but if I was happy, I'm happy to get.

✓ If I was very disappointed or upset when I saw the advertisement, I would definitely hate it, but if I was happy, I would be happy to see it.

条件句中描述过去情况，动词应使用过去时 'saw'，主句用 'would' 表示假设；'I'm happy to get' 语义不清，改为 'I would be happy to see it' 更合适。

× I like creative advertisements because it remind me of some artistic impression about the a product itself and may provide some useful and authentic feelings for me.

✓ I like creative advertisements because they remind me of some artistic impressions about the product itself and may provide some useful and authentic feelings for me.

'advertisements' 是复数，代词应使用 'they'；动词 'remind' 应与复数主语一致；'the a product' 冗余，去掉 'a'。

× Yes, I see a lot of advertisements when I'm using my phone or my computer, uh, for example, when I open up an, a website like Google or Microsoft web, uh, search for something and it will jump out a lot of what all the time.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements when I'm using my phone or my computer. For example, when I open a website like Google or Microsoft's website to search for something, a lot of ads will pop up all the time.

'open up an, a website' 中冠词重复且用词不当，应为 'open a website'；'Microsoft web' 应为 'Microsoft's website'；'jump out a lot of what all the time' 语序和用词错误，应改为 'a lot of ads will pop up all the time'。