Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، وتجنب التردد والكلمات غير الضرورية. استخدم جملة موضوعية واضحة ثم أضف تفاصيل داعمة بشكل منطقي.

예시: I don't remember a specific advertisement, but I recall that many ads when I was a child had catchy songs, which made them interesting to me.

제안: حاول أن ترد مباشرة على السؤال مع تقديم تفاصيل محددة، واستخدم روابط لتوضيح إجابتك بشكل أفضل.

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on buses and trains when I travel, especially colorful posters and digital screens that catch my attention.

제안: تجنب التردد والكلمات غير الضرورية، وكن واضحًا في التعبير عن رأيك مع تقديم أسباب أو أمثلة لدعم وجهة نظرك.

예시: Sometimes I like advertisements, especially simple signs, but I usually dislike ads that interrupt movies because they are annoying.

제안: حاول استخدام مفردات أكثر دقة وتقديم تفاصيل أو أمثلة توضح نوع الإعلانات التي تفضلها ولماذا.

예시: I like advertisements about new movies because they excite me, and also ads promoting health projects since they provide useful information.

제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر تنظيماً ووضوحاً، وتجنب التكرار والتردد، واستخدم روابط لتسلسل الأفكار.

예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on YouTube while using my phone or computer, especially ads about language learning and health products.

× I don't remember, but I think every umm ads ads they have umm, sang.

✓ I don't remember, but I think every ad has a song.

The word 'ads' is plural, but 'every' requires a singular noun, so 'ads' should be changed to 'ad'. Also, 'they have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular 'ad'.

× It's, uh, interesting about me when I'm a child.

✓ It was interesting to me when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past time, so the present tense 'is' and 'I'm' should be changed to past tense 'was'. Also, 'interesting about me' is awkward; 'interesting to me' is more natural.

× I see a lot of advertising, uh, when I am in car, uh, on the road.

✓ I see a lot of advertising when I am in a car on the road.

The phrase 'in car' is missing the article 'a'. Also, the sentence is in present tense and is correct otherwise.

× Uh, sometimes I like it, uh, when I see sign or like that, but umm, a lot of time when I watch movie, I don't like it adverse, I think.

✓ Sometimes I like it when I see signs or things like that, but most of the time when I watch movies, I don't like the ads, I think.

'Sign' and 'movie' should be plural as they refer to general instances. 'A lot of time' should be 'most of the time' for natural expression. 'Adverse' is incorrect; 'ads' or 'advertisements' is appropriate here.

× Uh, I like advertising about a new movies or uh, new, uh, health projects.

✓ I like advertising about new movies or new health products.

'A new movies' is incorrect because 'movies' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'health projects' is likely intended to be 'health products' which is more common in advertising context.

× Yeah, she would, uh, on my YouTube, I uh, every time I see a new, uh, a new advertising about, uh, learning language or uh, healthy, uh, products on YouTube.

✓ Yeah, on my YouTube, I see new advertisements about learning languages or healthy products every time.

'She would' is incorrect and unnecessary here. The sentence structure is awkward; pronouns and verbs should be aligned properly. 'Advertising' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the context.