Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, of course, in Hong Kong there's actually some very famous advertisement that every child have heard is with some catchy lyrics or songs that we can easily memorize after once we heard the advertisement.
시험관
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
수험생
Yes, of course there are many advertisements on trains or other transport which stick on the upper side of the transport where people can look and watch them whenever the train or bus passes by.
시험관
Do you like advertisements?
수험생
Yes, I do like advertisement because many of them are very creative and some even conveys some meaningful ideas or thoughts or message to share to people. I think it's not just to sell the products but raise awareness.
시험관
What kind of advertising do you like?
수험생
Oh, I like some advertisements, which is well designed and creative, and I think the layout is really important because I'm, uh, learning design also and I think some advertisement poster is really impressive.
시험관
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
수험생
Of course, I often see some advertisements on my computer when I'm scrolling on some websites or social media, and I think it's already a trend nowadays that you can see advertisement everywhere.
평가
총점
Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
점수: 70.0제안: 你的回答有点冗长且语法不够准确。建议你用更简洁的句子直接回答问题，并且注意时态和单复数的正确使用。
예시: Yes, there was a famous advertisement in Hong Kong when I was a child. It had catchy songs that were easy to remember after hearing them once.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答中信息较为重复，且句子结构稍显复杂。建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and buses. They are usually placed on the upper parts where passengers can easily see them.
Do you like advertisements?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误，如单复数和动词形式。建议注意语法准确性，并用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: Yes, I like advertisements because many of them are creative and convey meaningful messages. They not only sell products but also raise awareness.
What kind of advertising do you like?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，影响流畅度。建议去除口语填充词，注意主谓一致，并用更清晰的句子表达观点。
예시: I like advertisements that are well-designed and creative. Since I am learning design, I pay attention to the layout, which I find very impressive.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答较好，但“advertisement”应使用复数形式“advertisements”，并且可以用连接词使句子更自然。
예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on my computer when I scroll through websites or social media. Nowadays, it is a common trend to see advertisements everywhere.
문법
× Yes, of course, in Hong Kong there's actually some very famous advertisement that every child have heard is with some catchy lyrics or songs that we can easily memorize after once we heard the advertisement.
✓ Yes, of course, in Hong Kong there are actually some very famous advertisements that every child has heard, with some catchy lyrics or songs that we can easily memorize after hearing the advertisement.
The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'there's' should be 'there are' because 'advertisements' is plural; 'advertisement' should be plural to match 'some'; 'every child have heard' should be 'every child has heard' because 'every child' is singular and requires singular verb 'has'; 'after once we heard' is awkward and should be 'after hearing' for correct verb form and clarity.
× Yes, of course there are many advertisements on trains or other transport which stick on the upper side of the transport where people can look and watch them whenever the train or bus passes by.
✓ Yes, of course there are many advertisements on trains or other transport which stick to the upper side of the transport where people can look at and watch them whenever the train or bus passes by.
The preposition 'on' after 'stick' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' when referring to something attached to a surface. Also, 'look and watch' should be 'look at and watch' because 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when directing attention to something.
× Yes, I do like advertisement because many of them are very creative and some even conveys some meaningful ideas or thoughts or message to share to people.
✓ Yes, I do like advertisements because many of them are very creative and some even convey meaningful ideas, thoughts, or messages to share with people.
The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'many of them'. The verb 'conveys' should be 'convey' to agree with plural subject 'some'. Also, 'message' should be plural 'messages' to be consistent with 'ideas' and 'thoughts'. The phrase 'share to people' should be 'share with people' as 'share' is followed by 'with'.
× Oh, I like some advertisements, which is well designed and creative, and I think the layout is really important because I'm, uh, learning design also and I think some advertisement poster is really impressive.
✓ Oh, I like some advertisements, which are well designed and creative, and I think the layout is really important because I'm, uh, learning design also and I think some advertisement posters are really impressive.
The relative pronoun 'which' refers to plural 'advertisements' and should be followed by plural verb 'are'. 'Advertisement poster' should be plural 'advertisement posters' to match 'some'. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject 'posters'.
× Of course, I often see some advertisements on my computer when I'm scrolling on some websites or social media, and I think it's already a trend nowadays that you can see advertisement everywhere.
✓ Of course, I often see some advertisements on my computer when I'm scrolling on some websites or social media, and I think it's already a trend nowadays that you can see advertisements everywhere.
The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the context of seeing many ads everywhere.
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