Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为简单，缺少具体细节和连贯的表达。建议在回答中加入更多具体描述，如广告内容、为什么印象深刻等，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, when I was a child, I was deeply impressed by a charity advertisement that showed children in need. It made me realize the importance of helping others, and since then, I have always supported such causes.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“skip skiing them”不合适。建议使用正确表达，并补充具体细节，说明广告的种类或个人感受。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains, buses, and planes. However, I usually don't pay much attention to them because they are quite common and repetitive.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，缺少连接词和具体细节。建议丰富表达，使用连接词，并举例说明喜欢或不喜欢的原因。

예시: I think it depends on the type of advertisement. For example, I enjoy charity ads because they promote love and helping others, but I dislike commercial ads since they often feel too pushy.

제안: 回答简洁但缺少细节和连接词。建议增加具体例子和原因，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I prefer charity advertisements because they encourage people to help and care for each other. For instance, some ads show how donations can change lives, which I find very inspiring.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，影响理解。建议使用正确语法，补充完整句子，并具体说明对网络广告的看法。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on the Internet. Sometimes, when I open an app, an ad suddenly appears and even redirects me to another app, which I find quite annoying.

× Yes, there are a lot of advertising on trains and planes and buses and all kinds of them, but I never looked at them carefully.

✓ Yes, there is a lot of advertising on trains and planes and buses and all kinds of them, but I never looked at them carefully.

advertising 是不可数名词，前面应使用单数形式的动词 is，而不是复数形式的 are。

× I just skip skiing them.

✓ I just skip seeing them.

动词 skip 后应接动词的 -ing 形式，原句中的 skiing 是滑雪的意思，语义不符，应改为 seeing。

× I like the charity advertising most which always send the message to help others and care for each other.

✓ I like charity advertising most which always sends the message to help others and care for each other.

advertising 是不可数名词，视为单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式 sends。

× Yes, they are all cans of advertisements on the Internet, but I dislike them sometimes when you just hit into a app then it will jump into the advertisement and even another app.

✓ Yes, there are all kinds of advertisements on the Internet, but I dislike them sometimes when you just hit into an app then it will jump into the advertisement and even another app.

原句中 cans 应为 kinds，表示“各种各样的”，且 a app 应改为 an app，冠词使用错误。