Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
수험생
When I was a child, I used to love washing advertisements. And one advertisement, uh, which made an impression on me was umm.
시험관
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
수험생
I usually see an advertisement on metro because when I enter to the metro there are some pictures of advertisements and in some subways they also have some small screens where you can watch the advertisements of metro or other things.
시험관
Do you like advertisements?
수험생
Actually it depends on the advertisements, but uh, I usually umm, I used to love washing them but now, umm, it uh, becomes uh, so boring and I don't like to watch them.
시험관
What kind of advertising do you like?
수험생
I love advertisements which are both makeup or skin care products because it helps me, uh, to gain knowledge about them and which I can, which can I can buy and which I cannot buy. That's why I love watching them.
시험관
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
수험생
I see lots of advertisements when I'm, uh, when I watch, uh, movies or videos from YouTube on my computer. And actually it sucks because umm, every, in every 5 minutes I see, uh, it's free advertisements in a row. That's why it's really boring.
평가
총점
Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
점수: 50.0제안: Cavabınızda daha aydın və konkret olun. "Washing advertisements" ifadəsi qarışıqdır və mənası aydın deyil. Daha təbii və effektiv ifadələrdən istifadə edin və əlavə məlumat verin ki, cavabınız daha məzmunlu olsun.
예시: When I was a child, I really liked advertisements about washing machines because they showed how easy it was to clean clothes. One advertisement that impressed me was a commercial where a family happily used a new washing machine, which made me want one too.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
점수: 70.0제안: Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin. "Enter to the metro" ifadəsi səhvdir, düzgün ifadə "enter the metro" olmalıdır. Əlavə olaraq, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edərək cavabınızı daha axıcı edin.
예시: Yes, I often see advertisements in the metro. There are posters on the walls and sometimes small screens that show different ads, which makes the journey more interesting.
Do you like advertisements?
점수: 45.0제안: Cavabınızda çoxlu "uh" və "umm" kimi sözlər var, bunlar təbii danışıqda azaldılmalıdır. "I used to love washing them" ifadəsi qarışıqdır və mənası aydın deyil. Daha sadə və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin.
예시: It depends on the advertisement. I used to enjoy watching washing machine ads when I was younger, but now I find most ads boring and I don't like watching them.
What kind of advertising do you like?
점수: 65.0제안: Cümlənizdə təkrarlar və qarışıqlıq var. Daha sadə və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin və əlaqələndirici sözlərlə fikirlərinizi birləşdirin.
예시: I like advertisements about makeup and skin care products because they help me learn about new items and decide which ones I can buy.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
점수: 55.0제안: Danışığınızda çoxlu "uh" və "umm" var, onları azaltmağa çalışın. "It sucks" kimi qeyri-rəsmi ifadələrdən qaçının və daha uyğun sözlər seçin. Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin.
예시: I often see many advertisements when I watch videos on YouTube. They appear every five minutes, which can be quite annoying and boring.
문법
× I used to love washing advertisements.
✓ I used to love watching advertisements.
The verb 'washing' is incorrect here because the intended meaning is to view advertisements, not to clean them. The correct verb is 'watching', which is the verb + -ing form used to describe the action of looking at something.
× when I enter to the metro there are some pictures of advertisements
✓ when I enter the metro there are some pictures of advertisements
The verb 'enter' does not require the preposition 'to' after it. The correct form is 'enter the metro' without 'to'.
× in some subways they also have some small screens where you can watch the advertisements of metro or other things.
✓ in some subways they also have some small screens where you can watch advertisements about the metro or other things.
The phrase 'advertisements of metro' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'about' to indicate the subject of the advertisements.
× I usually umm, I used to love washing them but now, umm, it uh, becomes uh, so boring and I don't like to watch them.
✓ I usually, umm, used to love watching them but now, umm, it becomes so boring and I don't like to watch them.
Again, 'washing' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'watching' to indicate viewing advertisements.
× I love advertisements which are both makeup or skin care products because it helps me, uh, to gain knowledge about them and which I can, which can I can buy and which I cannot buy.
✓ I love advertisements that are about both makeup and skin care products because they help me to gain knowledge about them and which I can buy and which I cannot buy.
The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used and the sentence structure is awkward. 'That' is more appropriate for defining clauses, and 'both...and' is the correct correlative conjunction. Also, 'it helps me' should be 'they help me' to agree with the plural 'advertisements'.
× I see lots of advertisements when I'm, uh, when I watch, uh, movies or videos from YouTube on my computer.
✓ I see lots of advertisements when I'm, uh, watching movies or videos on YouTube on my computer.
The phrase 'watch movies or videos from YouTube' is better expressed as 'watching movies or videos on YouTube' to indicate the platform.
× every, in every 5 minutes I see, uh, it's free advertisements in a row.
✓ every 5 minutes I see free advertisements in a row.
The phrase 'every, in every 5 minutes' is redundant and incorrect. The correct quantifier is 'every 5 minutes'. Also, 'it's free advertisements' is incorrect; 'free advertisements' is sufficient without 'it's'.
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