Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些冗长且结构不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，先给出主题句，然后用简洁的细节支持。注意语法和单复数形式的正确使用。

예시: Yes, an advertisement about toothpaste for children impressed me because it featured lively and colorful characters that attracted kids' attention.

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子之间缺少连接词，且表达不够具体。建议使用连接词使回答更流畅，并具体说明你看到的广告类型。

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on buses and trains, especially those promoting hospitals and healthcare services.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁表达观点，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

예시: I like advertisements that are interesting and creative, but I dislike those that are boring or irresponsible.

제안: 回答不清晰且语法错误较多。建议先明确表达喜欢的广告类型，再用具体细节支持，注意句子结构和词汇使用。

예시: I like creative advertisements that cover a wide range of interesting topics and appeal to the general public.

× Yes, an advertisement which made a strong impression on me, which is a talk about toothpaste and especially for young children and the advertisements contains a lively and colorful characters to catch attention from children.

✓ Yes, an advertisement which made a strong impression on me, which is a talk about toothpaste especially for young children, and the advertisement contains lively and colorful characters to catch attention from children.

The definite article 'the' before 'advertisements' is incorrect because it refers to a specific advertisement previously mentioned, so it should be singular 'advertisement'. Also, 'a lively and colorful characters' is incorrect because 'characters' is plural and 'a' is singular article; 'a' should be removed. This correction ensures proper article use and agreement between article and noun number.

× Yes, transport and buses always have a lot of advertisement.

✓ Yes, transport and buses always have a lot of advertisements.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' because it refers to multiple ads seen on transport and buses. Using the plural form matches the context of quantity.

× From my observation.

✓ From my observation,

'From my observation' is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb or predicate. Adding a comma connects it properly to the following sentence or clause, making the sentence structure complete.

× I always say the hospital advertisement.

✓ I always see hospital advertisements.

The phrase 'say the hospital advertisement' is incorrect; likely the intended verb is 'see'. Also, 'hospital advertisement' should be plural 'hospital advertisements' to indicate multiple ads. The definite article 'the' is unnecessary here because it is a general statement.

× It depends the quality of advertisements.

✓ It depends on the quality of advertisements.

The verb 'depends' requires the preposition 'on' to connect to its object. Omitting 'on' is a common error. Adding 'on' corrects the phrase.

× If the contents contents is very interesting and creative, I would like.

✓ If the content is very interesting and creative, I would like it.

'Contents contents' is a repetition and incorrect plural form; 'content' is usually uncountable and singular here. Also, 'I would like' is incomplete; adding 'it' clarifies the object of liking.

× but it's just boring and lakes of responsibility, I would dislike them.

✓ but if it's just boring and lacks responsibility, I would dislike them.

'Lakes of responsibility' is a misspelling and incorrect phrase; it should be 'lacks responsibility'. Also, adding 'if' clarifies the conditional meaning. This correction fixes spelling and improves sentence clarity.

× Alike as a content is is a field of creativity and always promotes a subject that is very wide and interesting to public.

✓ I like content that is creative and always promotes subjects that are very broad and interesting to the public.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and awkward phrasing. 'Alike as a content' is incorrect; 'I like content' is clearer. 'Is is' is a repetition error. 'A field of creativity' is vague; 'creative' better describes content. 'Very wide' should be 'very broad'. Adding 'to the public' requires the definite article 'the'. This correction improves pronoun use, clarity, and article usage.