Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，且内容表达不清晰。建议注意时态一致，避免性别代词错误，并且补充完整句子，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I remember an advertisement from my childhood that left a strong impression on me. It featured a young boy helping his mother with cooking, highlighting the importance of family support. This ad was produced by the government to promote healthy family habits.

제안: 回答内容基本完整，但句子结构不够自然，存在语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I often see advertisements on trains and other public transport. I think it's an ideal place for companies to advertise because many people use these services daily, which helps spread information about their products effectively.

제안: 表达了明确观点，内容具体，但部分表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子衔接。

예시: No, I don't like advertisements at all. They can be very annoying, especially when they interrupt TV shows or reality programs suddenly. Sometimes, they even prompt you to click and buy products, which feels quite intrusive.

제안: 回答内容不够完整，语法和表达有误。建议提前准备相关话题，使用完整句子，并且具体描述喜欢的广告类型。

예시: I haven't thought about this before, but I think I like advertisements that tell a story. For example, I once saw an ad about an elderly father raising money to send his daughter to college, which was very touching.

× Yes, there was an impressive advertisement that I have seen when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, there was an impressive advertisement that I saw when I was a kid.

这里的时间状语是过去时（when I was a kid），所以从句中动词也应使用一般过去时，不能用现在完成时。

× I remember that was about a young boy who helped to clean her mother's food, which showed the clearness and helpful for the family.

✓ I remember that it was about a young boy who helped to clean his mother's food, which showed cleanliness and was helpful for the family.

这里的代词应与先行词一致，young boy是男性，故用his而非her。

× which showed the clearness and helpful for the family.

✓ which showed cleanliness and was helpful for the family.

clearness是名词，句中应使用名词cleanliness；helpful是形容词，前面缺少系动词was。

× It was shot by the government which aimed to improve in the.

✓ It was made by the government, which aimed to improve the situation.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语，且用词不当。应补充完整并调整表达。

× And I think the transportation it is the ideal way for the company to post their advertisement on because there are lots of people who taking the train or subway.

✓ And I think transportation is the ideal way for companies to post their advertisements on because there are lots of people who take the train or subway.

句中重复使用主语the transportation和it，造成冗余；动词taking应改为一般现在时take以符合习惯表达。

× And I think the transportation it is the ideal way for the company to post their advertisement on because there are lots of people who taking the train or subway.

✓ And I think transportation is the ideal way for companies to post their advertisements on because there are lots of people who take the train or subway.

company和advertisement应使用复数形式companies和advertisements，与句意一致。

× there are lots of people who taking the train or subway.

✓ there are lots of people who take the train or subway.

关系代词who后应接动词原形take，而非动名词taking。

× No, not at all. And I think they're so annoying, especially when you're watching the TV programs such as the TV series or the reality show.

✓ No, not at all. And I think they're so annoying, especially when you're watching TV programs such as TV series or reality shows.

the TV programs中the不必要，且TV series和reality shows通常不加the。

× There will suddenly pump out some advertisements and encourage you to click the screens and purchase the product, which is so rude.

✓ Advertisements will suddenly pop up and encourage you to click on the screen and purchase the product, which is so rude.

pump out用法不当，改为pop up更合适；click后应加介词on；screens改为screen更符合语境。

× Actually, I didn't think of this question before, but I suppose I would like some advertisement that link to certain stories.

✓ Actually, I hadn't thought of this question before, but I suppose I would like some advertisements that link to certain stories.

时态应为过去完成时hadn't thought；advertisement应为复数advertisements；that后动词应用第三人称单数形式links。

× some advertisement that link to certain stories.

✓ some advertisements that link to certain stories.

advertisements为复数，故动词用复数形式link。

× For example, I there was a time I thought an ad about the old father raised money for his daughter to go to the college.

✓ For example, there was a time I saw an ad about an old father raising money for his daughter to go to college.

句子结构混乱，I和there was位置错误；thought用法不当，应为saw；raised改为现在分词raising；去掉the college前的定冠词。