Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and directly address the question with a clear topic sentence. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, one advertisement that impressed me as a child was a colorful cartoon commercial for a popular cereal. It caught my attention because of its fun characters and catchy jingle, which made me want to try the product.

제안: Improve your answer by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make your response coherent. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and correct minor grammatical mistakes.

예시: Yes, definitely. Whenever I travel by Metro, I notice many advertisements both on the stations and inside the trains. Additionally, buses and street poles are often covered with various ads, which makes advertising very visible in public transport.

제안: To improve, try to avoid filler words and expand your answer with more specific examples or reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: Yes, I like advertisements because they inform me about new apps and upcoming events in my city. Moreover, advertisements serve as an effective way to communicate important information to the public.

제안: Focus on giving a clear opinion with supporting reasons, and avoid filler words. Use linking words to contrast your preferences and be more specific in your explanation.

예시: I enjoy various types of advertisements; however, I find printed ads in newspapers and video ads on YouTube irritating because they interrupt my reading and viewing experience.

× Although I don't think that advertisement always leave a a good impact on one's mind.

✓ Although I don't think that advertisements always leave a good impact on one's mind.

The word 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with the plural verb 'leave'. Also, there was a repeated 'a' which was removed. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper article usage.

× But in my case, I generally had a good experience with advertisement.

✓ But in my case, I generally had a good experience with advertisements.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' because the context refers to multiple ads experienced over time. Using plural matches the general experience described.

× Whenever I travel by Metro, I see a lot of advertisement on the stations and as well as inside the trains.

✓ Whenever I travel by Metro, I see a lot of advertisements on the stations as well as inside the trains.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'a lot of', which refers to multiple items. Also, 'and as well as' is redundant; 'as well as' alone is sufficient.

× And there are a lot of advertisement on buses and the, uh, the poles between the roads.

✓ And there are a lot of advertisements on buses and the, uh, poles between the roads.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with 'a lot of'. Also, the repeated 'the' before 'poles' was corrected to a single 'the'.

× I think advertisement is a very good form of, uh, communication and publicity.

✓ I think advertisement is a very good form of, uh, communication and publicity.

No correction needed here. 'Advertisement' is used in a general sense as a singular noun representing the concept, which is correct.

× I like all sorts of advertisements, but uh, I think the advertisements that are printed on paper and on YouTube are generally irritating because people like to read on the newspaper and watch videos on YouTube without interruptions.

✓ I like all sorts of advertisements, but uh, I think the advertisements that are printed on paper and on YouTube are generally irritating because people like to read the newspaper and watch videos on YouTube without interruptions.

The phrase 'read on the newspaper' is incorrect; it should be 'read the newspaper' without 'on'. This is a preposition usage issue, but since it relates to article and preposition use, it is corrected here for clarity.