Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，确保回答内容清楚且有逻辑。

예시: Yes, I remember a chocolate commercial from my childhood that made a strong impression on me. It featured a funny character that I still recall vividly even now.

제안: 回答中断句不自然，语法错误较多。建议练习连贯表达，注意时态和语法的正确使用。

예시: Yes, public transport is usually filled with advertisements, ranging from posters to digital screens. For example, in subway stations, you can often see ads for movies or various products.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，词汇使用错误，表达混乱。建议加强词汇积累和句子结构练习，确保表达准确。

예시: No, I don't like advertisements at all because I find them annoying and time-consuming. Most of them are boring to me.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但断句仍不自然。建议练习使用连贯句子和连接词，使表达更流畅。

예시: I really enjoy funny advertisements because they often have interesting stories and jokes. Sometimes, I even share these ads with my friends for entertainment.

× Which made a strong impression on my mind when I was a child.

✓ It made a strong impression on my mind when I was a child.

原句是一个不完整的句子，缺少主语。应使用完整句子，添加主语'It'，使句子完整。

× Deadwood Heisman had a funny son.

✓ Deadwood Heisman had a funny song.

原句中'son'应为'song'，根据上下文推测是指广告中的歌曲。

× Which I still can get.

✓ Which I still remember.

原句不完整且用词不当，'get'不符合语境，应改为'remember'表示记得。

× 8 hours of my mind.

✓ It stayed in my mind for 8 hours.

原句不完整且表达不清，应补充完整句子，表达广告在脑海中停留的时间。

× Yes, public transport is. Usually filled with.

✓ Yes, public transport is usually filled with advertisements.

原句断句错误，应合并为完整句子，避免句子碎片。

× Advertisements from poster to digital screens.

✓ Advertisements range from posters to digital screens.

原句缺少谓语动词，应补充完整句子，表达广告的种类范围。

× For example, on subway stations, you can always saw advertisements for movies or products.

✓ For example, in subway stations, you can always see advertisements for movies or products.

'saw'是过去式，句中时态应为一般现在时，且介词应为'in'而非'on'。

× No, I don't like out of his meds at all.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements at all.

原句词语错误，'out of his meds'无意义，应改为'advertisements'。

× I sync Jaya annoying and.

✓ I think they are annoying.

原句拼写和结构错误，应改为完整句子表达观点。

× Time comes zooming.

✓ They come zooming by quickly.

原句表达不清，应改为完整句子，表达广告快速出现的意思。

× And most of them are boring.

✓ Most of them are boring.

句首不宜用连词'And'，应直接陈述。

× I really enjoy funny advertisements because they often.

✓ I really enjoy funny advertisements because they often have interesting stories and jokes.

原句不完整，应补充完整句子。

× Have.

✓ have interesting stories and jokes.

单独的'Have.'不是完整句子，应与前句合并。

× Sometimes I even shared.

✓ Sometimes I even share them.

时态错误，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，且句子不完整。

× Those advertisements with my friends for entertaining.

✓ Those advertisements with my friends for entertainment.

表达不完整且用词错误，应改为'for entertainment'表示为了娱乐。