Advertisement— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, one advertisement that impressed me as a child was about encouraging girls to study. I often watched cartoons on TV, and this ad stood out because it promoted education for girls, which I found inspiring.

제안: Your answer is confusing and off-topic. Focus on directly answering the question about advertising on transport. Use clear sentences with proper grammar and linking words to explain your observations.

예시: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and other public transport. These ads are usually colorful and catch my attention while I travel.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear opinion about advertisements and explain their role using simple, correct sentences and relevant vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I like advertisements because they help people learn about new products. They play an important role in increasing sales and making products popular.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear wording and grammar errors. Clearly state the type of advertisements you prefer and explain why, using simple and correct sentences with linking words.

예시: I usually like advertisements about household products and daily activities because they are familiar to me. However, I do not like ads that focus on children's growth and development because they seem less interesting to me.

× There are lot of advertisement I have seen during my childhood as I am very fond of watching cartoons and other film movies on the television.

✓ There are a lot of advertisements I have seen during my childhood as I am very fond of watching cartoons and other films on the television.

The phrase 'lot of advertisement' is incorrect because 'advertisement' is singular and uncountable here, but the context requires plural. The correct form is 'a lot of advertisements' to indicate many ads. Also, 'film movies' is redundant; 'films' or 'movies' alone is sufficient.

× Many of ads are coming on that one of our advertisement that is very level is about the study of the girls.

✓ Many ads are coming; one of our advertisements that is very relevant is about the study of girls.

The phrase 'Many of ads' is incorrect; it should be 'Many ads'. The preposition 'on' is misused here. Also, 'very level' is unclear and likely a misuse of 'relevant' or 'important'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs clarification.

× Most usually I does not like to suffer on train as it is very inconvenient.

✓ Usually, I do not like to travel by train as it is very inconvenient.

'Most usually' is incorrect; 'usually' suffices. 'I does not' is wrong; the correct form is 'I do not'. 'Suffer on train' is awkward; 'travel by train' is more appropriate.

× Also why does not prefer to go with the local people's?

✓ Also, I do not prefer to go with the local people.

The sentence lacks a subject pronoun 'I'. 'Does not prefer' is incorrect without a subject. 'People's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be 'people'.

× The colors which is shoot my personality, but I see many of advertisement.

✓ The colors which show my personality, but I see many advertisements.

'Colors' is plural, so the verb should be 'show' not 'is shoot'. 'Many of advertisement' is incorrect; it should be 'many advertisements'.

× Yes, I like money.

✓ Yes, I like advertisements.

The answer 'Yes, I like money.' does not answer the question about liking advertisements. It seems to be a mistake or irrelevant response.

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✓ Advertisements are sources that play an important role in product appreciation and enhancement.

The sentence is repetitive and contains unnecessary words. 'Producteur' is likely a misspelling of 'product'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs simplification.

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✓ It also helps the growth and sale of a product that has been advertised.

'Helps her the more growth' is incorrect and unclear. 'Witcher' is likely a misspelling of 'which'. The sentence structure is incorrect and needs correction.

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✓ Usually, I like good advertisements about things related to household and other familiar activities, but I don't like ads that are about topics unrelated to children's growth and development.

The original sentence contains many unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'good no thing advertisement', 'ads are data that vector Hama folder honor'. These seem to be mistranslations or errors. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects adjective and noun usage.