Computers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且有重复，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的逻辑。建议简化表达，避免重复，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: I usually use a computer when I work, especially a high-performance one with a good GPU and CPU, because it helps me complete tasks more efficiently.

제안: 时态使用不准确，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议注意时态一致，补充细节使内容更具体。

예시: The first time I used a computer was in high school. Back then, the computers were slow, and we mainly learned how to type words using the keyboard.

제안: 表达较为清晰，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意动词形式和句子简洁，使用连接词增强连贯性。

예시: I believe my life would still be normal without a computer because I enjoy outdoor exercise and hobbies like playing musical instruments and basketball.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达重复且不自然。建议简化句子，使用连接词，并注意时态和语法。

예시: It is difficult for me to use a computer when I am very tired or have been using it for a long time, as I start to dislike it under those conditions.

× I think my life will be normal even without computer as I like to doing exercise outdoors and I have my hobbies.

✓ I think my life will be normal even without a computer as I like to do exercise outdoors and I have my hobbies.

动词后面接动名词时，'like to doing'是不正确的，应该用不定式'like to do'。这里应使用动词不定式形式。

× I think my life will be normal even without computer as I like to doing exercise outdoors and I have my hobbies.

✓ I think my life will be normal even without a computer as I like to do exercise outdoors and I have my hobbies.

在英文中，单数可数名词前需要冠词，'computer'前缺少冠词'a'。

× I use a computer in high school for the first time.

✓ I used a computer in high school for the first time.

这里时态应为过去时，且'computer'单数使用正确，无复数错误。

× I use a computer in high school for the first time.

✓ I used a computer in high school for the first time.

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去式，'use'应改为'used'。

× At that time the computer performance is very low and we only started to learn how to type a word via the keyboard and the display displayed it very.

✓ At that time the computer performance was very low and we only started to learn how to type a word via the keyboard and the display showed it very clearly.

描述过去情况时，动词应使用过去时，'is'应改为'was'，'display displayed it very'表达不完整，需补充副词使句子完整。

× At that time the computer performance is very low and we only started to learn how to type a word via the keyboard and the display displayed it very.

✓ At that time the computer performance was very low and we only started to learn how to type a word on the keyboard and the display showed it very clearly.

通常说'在键盘上打字'应使用介词'on'，而非'via'。

× I hate to use computer.

✓ I hate to use the computer.

此处缺少冠词，且'computer'前应加定冠词'the'以指代特定的电脑。

× In the condition that when I was very tired and I in a condition that I used the computer for a long time and I hate to use computer.

✓ When I am very tired or have used the computer for a long time, I hate to use the computer.

原句结构混乱，重复表达，应简化并调整句子结构，使其更通顺。

× In the condition that when I was very tired and I in a condition that I used the computer for a long time and I hate to use computer.

✓ When I am very tired or have used the computer for a long time, I hate to use the computer.

'computer'前缺少冠词，需加定冠词'the'。

× I think my life will be normal even without computer as I like to doing exercise outdoors and I have my hobbies.

✓ I think my life will be normal even without a computer as I like to do exercise outdoors and I have my hobbies.

动词'like'后应接不定式'to do'，而非动名词'doing'。