Computers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai về thì và số nhiều. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết hợp lý để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I use a computer whenever I study or work because it provides many useful tools and resources on the Internet. For example, I can access online libraries and educational websites, which help me complete my tasks efficiently.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn chính xác và tránh dùng các cụm từ không tự nhiên như "such a new computer things". Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I first used a computer when I was in primary school. We had a technology class where I learned basic computer skills, which was my first experience interacting with computers.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng các câu đơn giản và thêm các lý do cụ thể để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: If I didn't have a computer, my life would be very difficult because I study technology as my major. Without a computer, I wouldn't be able to learn or practice the skills I need for my future career.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh dùng các từ không phù hợp như "pledge". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể với liên kết hợp lý.

예시: It would be difficult to use a computer when there is no internet connection or power supply. Without internet, many applications cannot work, which makes using the computer boring and limited.

× Anytime when I were studying or doing some stuff, I always depends on computer because there was a lot of tools you can search in Internet or a school or shooting site.

✓ Anytime when I was studying or doing some stuff, I always depended on the computer because there were a lot of tools you could search on the Internet or a school or shooting site.

The verb 'were' should be 'was' to agree with the singular subject 'I' in past tense. 'Depends' should be 'depended' to match past tense. 'There was' should be 'there were' because 'tools' is plural. 'Can' should be 'could' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'on the Internet' is the correct preposition.

× Anytime when I were studying or doing some stuff, I always depends on computer because there was a lot of tools you can search in Internet or a school or shooting site.

✓ Anytime when I was studying or doing some stuff, I always depended on the computer because there were a lot of tools you could search on the Internet or a school or shooting site.

The noun 'computer' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific device used by the speaker. Similarly, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Anytime when I were studying or doing some stuff, I always depends on computer because there was a lot of tools you can search in Internet or a school or shooting site.

✓ Anytime when I was studying or doing some stuff, I always depended on the computer because there were a lot of tools you could search on the Internet or a school or shooting site.

The correct preposition with 'search' is 'on' not 'in' when referring to the Internet.

× It's hard to remember exactly, but I think it might be when I was going to the primary school.

✓ It's hard to remember exactly, but I think it might have been when I was going to primary school.

The phrase 'might be' should be 'might have been' to correctly express a past possibility. Also, 'the primary school' is better as 'primary school' without 'the' when referring to school in general.

× It's hard to remember exactly, but I think it might be when I was going to the primary school.

✓ It's hard to remember exactly, but I think it might have been when I was going to primary school.

When referring to school in general, the definite article 'the' is usually omitted.

× Yeah, we have the technology subject and I have to learn everything in computer, so that is the first time I interact with such a new computer things.

✓ Yeah, we had the technology subject and I had to learn everything on the computer, so that was the first time I interacted with such new computer things.

The preposition with 'learn' in this context is 'on' the computer, not 'in'. Also, 'interact' should be in past tense 'interacted' to match the past context.

× Yeah, we have the technology subject and I have to learn everything in computer, so that is the first time I interact with such a new computer things.

✓ Yeah, we had the technology subject and I had to learn everything on the computer, so that was the first time I interacted with such new computer things.

The verbs 'have', 'have to', and 'is' should be in past tense 'had', 'had to', and 'was' to match the past time frame. 'Interact' should be 'interacted'.

× Yeah, we have the technology subject and I have to learn everything in computer, so that is the first time I interact with such a new computer things.

✓ Yeah, we had the technology subject and I had to learn everything on the computer, so that was the first time I interacted with such new computer things.

The phrase 'a new computer things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. It should be 'such new computer things' without 'a'.

× Where I choose technology as my major major.

✓ I chose technology as my major.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. It should be a complete sentence with subject and verb: 'I chose technology as my major.' Also, 'major' is repeated unnecessarily.

× Where I choose technology as my major major.

✓ I chose technology as my major.

The verb 'choose' should be in past tense 'chose' to match the past context.

× So if I don't have a computer or I never use it, it would be really awkward because I never know that what exactly I want to and maybe I will learn some things more abstract not related to computers.

✓ So if I didn't have a computer or never used it, it would be really awkward because I wouldn't know exactly what I want to do and maybe I would learn some more abstract things not related to computers.

The pronouns and verb forms need to be consistent in conditional past form: 'didn't have', 'never used', 'wouldn't know', 'would learn'. Also, 'what exactly I want to' is incomplete and should be 'what I want to do'.

× So if I don't have a computer or I never use it, it would be really awkward because I never know that what exactly I want to and maybe I will learn some things more abstract not related to computers.

✓ So if I didn't have a computer or never used it, it would be really awkward because I wouldn't know exactly what I want to do and maybe I would learn some more abstract things not related to computers.

The phrase 'learn some things more abstract' is incorrect; it should be 'learn some more abstract things' to correctly place the adjective 'abstract' before the noun 'things'.

× Maybe when you don't have a pledge or you don't have Wi-Fi so you cannot do anything with the computer because you just can go into some apps that don't have Internet, but it's really, really boring as Internet is the place, the environment, the House of everything.

✓ Maybe when you don't have a plug or you don't have Wi-Fi, you cannot do anything with the computer because you can only use some apps that don't require Internet, but it's really, really boring as the Internet is the place, the environment, the house of everything.

'Pledge' is incorrect; it should be 'plug'. Also, 'you just can go into some apps' is better as 'you can only use some apps'. 'Don't have Internet' should be 'don't require Internet'. 'House' should not be capitalized here.

× Maybe when you don't have a pledge or you don't have Wi-Fi so you cannot do anything with the computer because you just can go into some apps that don't have Internet, but it's really, really boring as Internet is the place, the environment, the House of everything.

✓ Maybe when you don't have a plug or you don't have Wi-Fi, you cannot do anything with the computer because you can only use some apps that don't require Internet, but it's really, really boring as the Internet is the place, the environment, the house of everything.

The word 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to it as a specific entity.