Computers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误，句子不够连贯，且表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，避免句子碎片化，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually use a computer when I need to complete work-related tasks, such as writing reports and creating presentations, because it offers efficiency and access to various software tools.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，明确表达时间和用途。

예시: The first time I used a computer was when I was eight years old, and I used it to play games.

제안: 回答不连贯，句子不完整，表达含糊。建议用完整句子清晰表达观点，并提供具体原因。

예시: Without a computer, it would be difficult for me to complete some projects because I rely on software that helps me work efficiently, so not having it would waste a lot of my time.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，句子断断续续，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，逻辑清晰地说明原因。

예시: It would be difficult for me to use a computer when there is no internet connection because I cannot browse websites or access online resources easily.

× Such as writing reports over.

✓ Such as writing reports.

句子中“over”多余且不符合语法，应该去掉。此处“writing reports”作为举例，使用动名词形式正确。

× because it offer efficiency and access to various software tools.

✓ because it offers efficiency and access to various software tools.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“offers”。

× The first time I use a computer when I was eight years old, Emily used it for.

✓ The first time I used a computer was when I was eight years old; Emily used it for

描述过去事件时，动词应使用过去式，“use”应改为“used”。句子结构不完整，需补充谓语。

× Play a game.

✓ playing a game.

此处应使用动名词形式“playing”作为宾语，且应与前文连贯，构成完整句子。

× It would be difficult for me to complete some.

✓ It would be difficult for me to complete some projects.

句子不完整，缺少宾语“projects”，导致表达不清。

× Ya. I can use their software to handle it so that very.

✓ Yes. I can use the software to handle it very well.

“their”指代不明，应改为“the”指代前文提到的软件；“so that very”表达不完整，应改为“very well”表示程度。

× Those waste my time.

✓ Those would waste my time.

缺少情态动词“would”使句子完整，表达假设语气。

× I have.

✓ I have difficulty.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，导致表达不清。

× I use computer difficult, maybe in the conditions of lack of.

✓ I find using a computer difficult, maybe in conditions of lack of

“computer”应加冠词“a”，且“use computer difficult”表达不当，应改为“find using a computer difficult”。

× Because of that, I can't browse website easily.

✓ Because of that, I can't browse websites easily.

“website”应为复数形式“websites”，且“browse”后面直接接复数名词。

× So that I can't. Get.

✓ So I can't get online easily.

句子不完整，缺少宾语和谓语，需补充完整表达。