Computers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。可以用更连贯的句子表达工作时使用电脑的情况。

예시: I use a computer whenever I am working, especially because my job involves image editing and data analysis. I often spend the entire day in front of the computer when I have tasks due before deadlines.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意时态一致，并且清楚描述第一次使用电脑的经历。

예시: The first time I used a computer was at university. We had to submit our assignments online and learned how to send emails using the computer.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议用完整句子描述没有电脑时的生活影响，并且使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: My work involves editing images and analyzing data using a computer. Without a computer, I would have to do all these tasks manually on paper, which would be very time-consuming and inefficient.

제안: 回答语法混乱且表达不清晰，建议理清思路，使用完整句子并明确说明没有网络连接时使用电脑的困难。

예시: It would be very difficult for me to use a computer if I had no internet connection because my work involves editing images online, and without internet, I cannot access the necessary tools.

× I use computer whenever I'm working.

✓ I use a computer whenever I'm working.

computer 是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词 a。

× My working involves images, analyzes and I stay in front of the computer entire day when I am dealing with the task before LA deadlines.

✓ My work involves images, analysis and I stay in front of the computer the entire day when I am dealing with tasks before LA deadlines.

working 应改为 work 表示工作；analyzes 是动词的第三人称单数形式，名词应为 analysis；task 应用复数 tasks；缺少定冠词 the。

× So I sit for awhile in front of the computer.

✓ So I sit for a while in front of the computer.

awhile 是副词，表示“一会儿”，此处应使用短语 a while，表示“一段时间”。

× When I was studying in the university, it was the first time I learn to use a computer and we have to submit our assignment from the Internet and we learn to added emails by computer and it was.

✓ When I was studying at the university, it was the first time I learned to use a computer and we had to submit our assignments via the Internet and we learned to send emails by computer.

时态应统一为过去时：learn 应为 learned；have to 应为 had to；assignment 应为复数 assignments；added 用法错误，应为 send；介词 from 改为 via。

× My work involves editing images and data analyzed by a computer.

✓ My work involves editing images and data analyzed by a computer.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× So if I. Didn't have a computer, I have to do all this task is by writing on papers and also the calculator it will be.

✓ So if I didn't have a computer, I would have to do all these tasks by writing on paper and also using a calculator.

条件句中虚拟语气应使用 would have to；task 应用复数 tasks；writing on papers 改为 writing on paper；缺少动词 using。

× My work are you in Bob's editing images on the Internet, so it will be very difficult if I'm I have I had no Internet or connection and I cannot interact the my image editing or without.

✓ My work involves editing images on the Internet, so it would be very difficult if I had no Internet connection and I could not interact with my image editing software.

work 是不可数名词，谓语用单数 involves；时态应为虚拟语气 would be 和 had；Internet connection 是固定搭配；interact 后应加介词 with；句子结构混乱需调整。